Decision taking lonely
Every day we face new things and challenges that must solve by correct decision .the matter that we should consider is how to take correct decision. I think that use of experiences other people is the best way for do that.
first young people should consult to sophisticated persons who have deep vision about especial matter.for example for education we need to use a consultor that called teacher Or in finance and investment business expert gives us guidance .
second we collect right opinions from experts but in the last stage we make decision lonely.however sometimes it leads to failur(beaten) but it is necessary because of self.confidence .as far we as know self confidence is important factor for life and building our personality .moreover any failur is an introduction to victory and achievement.Also making decision lonely reinforcre our indepedetncy .
finally all we know experieneces are the best teacher in our life.So a little brave for Decision taking is vital.when experience mixed to udacity and lead to make correct decision and drop out risking. for instance in stoks and marketing the decision for buying and selling need to use guidances of experts and udacity at the same time for get benefite or prevent to finance collapse
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Independent Decision Making
First, young people should consult sophisticated persons with deep vision about the matter. For example, in education, we can ask a counselor or a teacher, while in finance and investment, a business expert can give us guidance.
Second, we can collect opinions from experts, but we must finally make the decision alone. This can lead to failure, but failure can teach us many things, including self-confidence. As we know, self-confidence is important to build personality. Moreover, failure is an introduction to victory and achievement. Also, making a decision alone reinforces our independence .
Finally, we all know that experience is life's best teacher, so bravery in decision-making is vital. Experience mixed with audacity can lead to correct decision-making and good risk-taking. For instance, in stocks and marketing, the decision to buy and sell needs expert guidance and audacity at the same time in order to receive benefits or prevent financial collapse.
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Must solved by... is wrong , you should say : Must be solved
*Consult with
*That is called ,
*Secondly, Firstly
After However you should bring comma ,,, . However,
*as far as we know ....
*is an important factor
*independency
After finally you should bring comma. ( Finally, .... )
*taking a decission
*make a correct decission
*for getting or preventing financial...
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