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"Star named Sun" "Star named Sun" by Victor Tsoi White snow, gray ice On the cracked ground Her quilt is city in road's loop And clouds float above city And they hide sky light And the yellow light above city And city is two thousand years old Lived under light of Star named Sun And we know that this was always That the one is more loved by fate Who live on the other laws And who is to die young He doesn't know the words "yes" and "no" He doesn't know neither ranks nor names He is able to reach for the stars And not to considered that this is dream And to fall scorched of Star named Sun And two thousand years there is a war The war without special reasons The war is a case for young This is a drug from wrinkles Red, red blood in a hour it's just water In two hours on it flowers and grass In tree hours it's alive again And warmed the rays of the Star named Sun --- Original "Звезда по имени Солнце" Виктор Цой Белый снег, серый лёд На растрескавшейся земле Одеялом лоскутным на ней Город в дорожной петле А над городом плывут облака Закрывая небесный свет А над городом желтый дым Городу две тысячи лет Прожитых под светом звезды по имени Солнце И мы знаем, что так было всегда Что судьбою больше любим Кто живет по законам другим И кому умирать молодым Он не знаем слова "да" и слова "нет" Он не помнит ни чинов, ни имен Он способен дотянуться до звезд Не считая, что это сон И упасть, опаленным звездой по имени Солнце И две тысячи лет война Война без особых причин Война дело молодых Лекарство против морщин Красная, красная кровь Через час уже просто земля Через два на ней цветы и трава Через три она снова жива И согрета лучами звезды по имени Солнце. ---

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And (for) two thousand years there is war


 war without special reasons


war is a thing for young


a treatment  for  wrinkles


Red, red blood

 in a hour it's just dirt (earth)

In two hours on it flowers and grass


In three hours again it’s alive 

And warmed by the rays of the Star named Sun





Great translation!

Val

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Привет Rita. Спасибо- красивое стихотворение!


3 строфы--Господи! Трудно!

 

"Star named Sun" by Victor Tsoi



 

White snow, gray ice


On the cracked ground


Her quilt is city in road's loop


And clouds float above city


Hiding  sky (heaven’s) light


And above the city is yellow smoke


Thecity is two thousand years old


Living under the light of Star named Sun



 

And we know that this always was


That the one is more loved by fate


Who live (or He who lives…) by other laws


And who dies young (singular)


He doesn't know the words "yes" and "no"


He knows neither ranks nor names


He is able to reach for the stars


Not considering that  this is dream


And to fall scorched by Star named Sun



 

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