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My village. I live in a village in the mountains. It's very quiet. In summer, the village is full, but in winter it is empty. The winter is very long. The village have a river, the river is as big as the Guadiana. There is a bridge, it's less beautiful than London Bridge. You can see a church, it's the most beautiful, I want to get married there. You can walk by the long ways, and I can see the animals, a lot of animals.

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My village.

I live in a village in the mountains. It's very quiet. In summer, the village is full, but in winter it is empty. The winter is very long. The village have has a river, the river is as big as the Guadiana. There is a bridge, it's less beautiful than London Bridge. You can see a church, it's the most beautiful thing I have ever seen, I want to get married there. You can walk long walks by the long ways, and I can see the wild animals, a lots of animals.


Muy bien. Me gusta tu párrafo está muy interesante. 

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My village.

I live in a village in the mountains. It's very quiet. In summer, the village is crowded and buzzy while in winter it is secluded. The winter is very long. The village has a river as big as the Guadiana. Also there is a bridge less beautiful than London Bridge. You can see an elegant church where I am going to get married there. Moreover, you can walk by the long ways and see various animals.
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My village.

I live in a village in the mountains. It's very quiet. In summer, the village is full, but in winter it is empty. The winter is very long. The village have has a river, the river is as big as the Guadiana. There is a bridge, it's less beautiful than London Bridge. You can see a church, it's the most so beautiful.   I want to get married there. You can walk by the long ways walks, and   I  can see the wild  animals, a  lots of animals.

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I've only suggested changes where I spotted grammatical errors or where your meaning wasn't clear to me.  Your style is simple and almost poetic.  Be careful not to overload it by using slightly pompous words or slang, in the hope of making it look more sophisticated.   I like it very much as it is.  Let it develop at its own pace.

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