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I'm delighted by ur interests in ancient Chinese poems as I have been really got into it too./I learnt that u expect me to recommend my fav poet to you.Li Bai was one of the most distinguished poets of Tang dynasty who is worth ur appreciation and admiration.His poems suggest his extraoridinary intelligence.Faced with countless hardships,troubled by numerous annoying problems,he stuck to his integrity and was never beaten up.He kept chasing his ambition for a lifetime and turned a deaf ear to negative remarks so they wouldn't stand a chance to upset him.His poems are loaded with passionate and postive lines which spurs readers to accomplish their ideal./I hope you enjoy Li Bai's masterpieces.
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Recommending a poet
I'm delighted by your interests in ancient Chinese poems as I'm also interested in them. A poet I'd like to recommend is Li Bai who is one of the most distinguished poets of Tang dynasty and is worth your appreciation and admiration. His poems suggest his extraoridinary intelligence. Faced with countless hardships, he stuck to his integrity and never let it beat him. He chased his ambition his whole life and ignored negative remarks so they wouldn't effect him. His poems are full of passionate and postive lines which spur on readers to accomplish their ideals . I hope you enjoy Li Bai's masterpieces.
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