My hobbies
Once I tried drawing on the glass and I really liked it. Technology was not difficult. I started with simple drawings, then the drawings became more complicated. I like drawing on glass, because it calms and brings harmony into my life.
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My Hobbies
Once I tried drawing on the glass and I really liked it. Technology The technique was not difficult. I started with simple drawings, then the drawings became more complicated. I like drawing on glass because it calms and brings harmony into my life.Хорошо!
Articles are confusing, and even English speakers use them differently. An American will say, "I was injured while on a vacation, and I went to the hospital." An Englishman will say, "I was injured whilst on holiday, and I went to hospital." There's no good rule that I'm aware of. It's a matter of practice.
I think you might have meant to write "technique" in reference to artwork. That would make more sense to an English speaker.
Commas are rare before "because", and are used to avoid confusion. A good source for commas and because is here...
http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/when-to-use-a-comma-before-because
This was well written. Any English speaker would understand you.
Also, your artwork is good.
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Congratulations Katya. You're a good painter!
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My hobbies
Once I tried drawing on the glass and I really liked it. The technology was not difficult. I started with simple drawings, and then the drawings became more complicated. I like drawing on glass, because it calms me and brings harmony into my life.Very nice drawing.
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it´s really so cutee, you´re a good painter :)
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