A story of my family
I was doing homework one day ,when a stone hitted at my window.It surprised me,so I saw out of window.Guess what I found my elder brother was picking stone on the ground.He was such a funny boy before but now he is an adult.I still remembered I played with him at that day,we played on the playground.We had a wonderful day because we decided to have a jurney game together.And I acted a character who can use magic to fight against evil monster.Although it was an image game we enjoy it deeply and totally fogot time till our mother tell us got back for dinner.Recently the story came into my mind and I cried because my brother dieded in 2012.I want to share happniess with him but the opportunity lost forever.
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A story of my family
I was doing homework one day ,when a stone hit on my window.It surprised me,so I looked out of the window.Guess what I saw, my elder brother picking stones from the ground.He was such a funny boy before but now he is an adult.I still remember when I played with him on that day at the playground.We had a wonderful day because we decided to have a journey game together.And I acted out a character who can use magic to fight against evil monsters. Even though it was an image game, we thoroughly enjoyed and totally forgotten the time til our mother called us for dinner. This story came into my mind recently and I cried because my brother died in 2012.I want to continue to share happiness with him but the opportunity is lost.Such a touching story, 化悲痛为力量 ;)
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