Is this email correct? Thanks! To whom it may concern, I am grateful for the opportunity to propose some suggestions regarding the facilities of my old college. I hope my opinion will be useful for this matter. One of the most important issues regarding the socialization of the students is the availability of a space that can meet those needs. What we have now is an old fashioned backyard that needs to be refurbished as soon as possible, however, if we could change the use of that space and tell the students to gather in the new building that would be even more appropriate since it is bigger and closer to the main entrance. The floors and the ceilings in the classrooms need to be repaired as well, the general decay of the building is not inspiring for the students and have a negative impact in their motivation towards study. These academic and social factors are facets of the same problem. I am aware that the budget of the college is limited in this moment but we must consider that this investment will obtain reasonable returns in the future. The parents and teachers of the college agree with these points of view, and of course, the students. I will be glad to present a detailed report to the college council next week when we can further discuss the implications of my proposal. Yours sincerely, Mr. Marshall