The first flower
Eventually flower bloom Whether winter is long dark freeze.
Colorful world is coming.
Go outside and a day hike are all good idea. :)
lol
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Eventually a flower blooms after winter's long, dark, freezing weather.
A colourful world is coming
going outside or taking a day hike are good ideas :)
lol ;)
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Hi Kathy,
It’s great to read your poetry. You’re meaning comes through clearly. I agree with Dai’s interpretation/changes. Here is another way to craft it, for comparison:
Eventually flowers bloom even after winter’s long dark freeze.
A colourful world is coming.
Go outside. Take a day hike.
These are good ideas.
Lol. :-)
* spelling: colour/color UK and Canada / USA both are correct
Again, well done!
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