Can you help me , i don't not if the punctuation and commas are correct
After that Margaret leaves of the wedding, the groom wondered if he had done the right thing in letting it she go, but his ex-made him understand that it was wrong in letting it she go was in that moment he decided to go after her.
It was direct to the airport, but it was too late the airplane had taken off. Was when he saw one of his friends who worked in the tower. He requested to speak with the pilot of the plane. Andrew talk to the pilot and asked him to let her listen to the next message. The pilot of the plane I accept. Andrew gives the following message "Not is if you're listening to this, but at the beginning, take me this opportunity to get my revenge, but the passing of the days I fell in love with you and I want to marry me".
Margaret did not think it two times and took a parachute, he opened the door of the aircraft and she jumped of the plane. Meanwhile he thought in your mind about that if she had heard the message, I look at the sky and saw as a silhouette was approaching to him.
Gradually he realized that that person was Margaret screaming with fear after she told him that his family would be angry for what she had done.
He said that he did not mind and if your family wanted it ,would respect their decision. The next day they were married.
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Can you help me? I don't know not if the punctuation and commas are correct.
After that Margaret left of the wedding, the groom wondered if he had done the right thing in letting her it she go, but his ex made him understand that it was wrong in letting herit she go. It was in that moment that he decided to go after her.It was direct to the airport, but it was too late; the airplane had taken off. That was when he saw one of his friends who worked in the tower. He requested to speak with the pilot of the plane. Andrew talked to the pilot and asked him to let her listen to the next message. The pilot of the plane I accepted. Andrew gave the following message: "I don't know if you're listening to this, but at the beginning, take me this opportunity to get my revenge, but the passing of the days over time I fell in love with you and I want you to marry me."
Margaret did not think twice it two times and took a parachute. He opened the door of the aircraft, and she jumped out of the plane. Meanwhile, he thought in your mind about that wondered if she had heard the message. I look He looked at the sky and saw as a silhouette was approaching to him.
Gradually he realized that that person was Margaret screaming with fear after she told him that his family would be angry for what she had done.
He said that he did not mind and if your (her? his?) family wanted it, (they?) would respect their decision. The next day they were married.
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Hi Mario, I tried to focus on punctuation, but there were some unclear things:
--Direct to the airport? Do you mean it was a straight shot to the airport? (Clear way, no turns or traffic)
--Sometimes I'm not sure if you mean to say He/Him (man) or She/Her (woman)...be careful about this.
--In the message, who is taking an opportunity for revenge?
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