My Holisays Please I need someone correct me those writings because I am not sure if iI have dome them well Thank you very very much. My name's Carlos. On 7th April I am going on Holly holidays. I

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My Holisays Please I need someone correct me those writings because I am not sure if iI have dome them well Thank you very very much. My name's Carlos. On 7th April I am going on Holly holidays. I will pass my Holly Week with my cousins from Madrid. If it won't rain we are going to see the typical tradiction in Spain called "Procesiones". My cousins have never seen "las procesiones" in Andalucía so they are very anxious to visit Ronda and me too. My name's Carlos. I am going to tell about my next summer holidays. We are going to visit "El camininto del Rey" with my cousins from Madrid. My aunt have already bought the tickets by Internet. The problem is my mother is sick but I hope she will be well on summer. In coclusion we are going to spend a good holidays and my mother will be with us.

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My Holidays

Please, I need someone to correct what I wrote because I am not sure if what I have written is correct.

Thank you very very much.

My name's Carlos. On April 7th, I am going on Holly holidays. I will spend my Holly Week with my cousins from Madrid. If it doesn't rain, we are going to see, "Procesiones," which is a common tradition in Spain. My cousins have never seen "Las procesiones" in Andalucía, so they are very anxious to visit Ronda and me.

My name's Carlos. I am going to tell about my upcoming summer holiday plans.

We are going to visit "El camininto del Rey" with my cousins from Madrid.

The problem is my mother is sick, and my aunt has already bought the tickets on the internet. I hope she will get better by the summer.

In conclusion, we are surely going to have a good holiday, and hopefully my mother will be with us.

Lo siento no es una experta en gramatica del ingles pero, el ingles es mi permero idioma.

My Holisays

Please I need someone correct me those writings because I am not sure if I have done them well
Thank you very very much.

My name's Carlos. On 7th April I am going on Holly holidays. I will pass my Holly Week with my cousins from Madrid. If it won't rain we are going to see the typical tradictions in Spain called "Procesiones". My cousins have never seen "las procesiones" in Andalucía so they are very anxious to visit Ronda and me too.

My name's Carlos. I am going to write about my next summer holidays.
We are going to visit "El camininto del Rey" with my cousins from Madrid.
My aunt have has already bought the tickets online. The problem is that my mother is sick but I hope she will be well on summer.
In coclusion finally, we are going to spend a good holidays and my mother will be with us.

Very good writing, I have either corrected or added the yellow words.

My Holidays

Please,I need someone to correct my note those writings because I am not sure if I iI have done it correctly dome them well
Thank you very very much.

My name's Carlos. On 7th April I am going on Holly holidays. I will spend the pass my Holly Week with my cousins from Madrid. If it doesn't won't rain we are going to watch a see the typical tradiction in Spain called "Procesiones". My cousins have never seen "las procesiones" in Andalucía so they are very eager anxious to visit Ronda and so am I. me too.

My name's Carlos. I am going to write tell about my next summer holidays.
We are going to visit "El camininto del Rey" with my cousins from Madrid.
My aunt has already bought the tickets on the by Internet. The problem is my mother is sick but I hope she will be well in the on summer.
In conclusion we are going to have spend a good holidays and my mother will be with us.

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