One day for me
This is the third day of learning English. The weather of today is very good. I haven't see the blue sky and white cloud since the last Wednesday.my city has been raining for nearly a week, but today, the sky is light blue and there are many white clouds on it. A light breeze lifted my hair and the sun shone on my body when I sat on the lawn, how happy I was! Spring is around the corner. I like spring, because I can wear my beautiful skirts and go to wild to fly kite as well as enjoy lovely flowers. If my best friends would come with me, I will feel more happiness.
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One Day for Me
This is the third day of learning English. The weather of today is very good. I haven't seen blue sky and white clouds like this since the last Wednesday. In my city has been raining for nearly a week, but today the sky is light blue and there are many white clouds in it. A light breeze lifted my hair and the sun shone on my body when I sat on the lawn. How happy I was! Spring is around the corner. I like spring, because I can wear my beautiful skirts and go out into nature to a fly kite, as well as enjoy lovely flowers. If my best friends would come with me, I would be happier.1
One day for me
This is my third day of learning English. The weather today is very good. I haven't see blue skies and white clouds since last Wednesday. My city has had rain for nearly a week, but today the sky is light blue and there are many white clouds. A light breeze lifted my hair and the sun shone on my body when I sat on the lawn, how happy I was! Spring is around the corner. I like spring, because I can wear my beautiful skirts and go to wild* to fly kite as well as enjoy lovely flowers. If my best friends came with me, I would feel happier.*Perhaps better phrased as a more specific place eg: 'the forest', 'the park' etc.
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