About today
As always, I woke up at 7:00 am to going to my work. At first one, I take a shower and next I take a breakfast. After it, I run away to my work. When I arrive there, I sit on my chair and I begin to turn on my laptop. For while my laptop still turned off, I take a coffee and talk to my friends of the job. My laptop now is turned on, and I have to design some templates on AutoCAD.
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About today
As always, I woke up at 7:00 am to go to work. Firstly, I took a shower, then I ate breakfast (keep to the same tense, that is, the past tense; took breakfast is also fine but ate breakfast sounds more natural). After that, I ran to work (not sure what you mean by "run away"). When I arrived, I sat in my chair and I turned on my laptop. While my laptop was powering up, I took some coffee and talked to my friends at my workplace. My laptop is now powered up and I have to design some templates on AutoCAD (the present tense is now correct as you are now describing the present, what went before would use the past tense).0
As always, I wake up at 7:00 am to go to my work. First, I take a shower, and next I have breakfast. After that, I run to my work. When I arrive there, I sit on my chair and I begin to turn on my laptop. While my laptop is still turning off, I have coffee and talk to my friends about the job. My laptop now is turned on, and I have to design some templates on AutoCAD.
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