Anyone can help me to correct the grammar error in the below paragraph. Thanks you!!
Individualism vs. collectivism (IND): The extent to which individuals decide to remain in a collaborative group is what is referred to as collectivism. Individualism is used to describe when an individual chooses to work on his or her own. For the people preferring collectivism, the social framework of being a part of a group who cares for one another is their preference.
Masculinity vs. femininity (MAS): This where an individual either prefers to work in a heroic atmosphere, solo work, as opposed to working as a group, cooperation, and creating relationships.
The fifth dimension is added later by Hofstede (2001): Long-term vs. short-term orientation that refers to which a culture programs its members to accept delayed gratification of their material, social, and emotional needs.
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Anyone can help me to correct the grammatical errors in the below paragraph. Thank you!!
Individualism vs. collectivism (IND): The extent to which individuals decide to remain in a collaborative group is what is referred to as "collectivism". "Individualism" is used to describe when an individual chooses to work on their own. For those who prefer collectivism, being in a caring group is their preference."Masculinity vs. femininity (MAS)".?* This is where one prefers to work in a (heroic?) atmosphere, working alone, as opposed to working in a group, cooperating, and creating relationships.
The fifth dimension is added later by Hofstede (2001): "Long-term vs. short-term orientation" refers to a culture whose members are more likely to save for the future than not.
Please take care to include the quotation marks whenever you are defining a word.
*this seems like a very queer definition. However, I cannot argue; one can define 'ring finger' as the 16:30 train from Paddington to Euston. Once the definition is clearly stated, you can use words in all kinds of weird and wonderful ways.
Very well written!
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Anyone can help me to correct the grammar error in the below paragraph. Thanks you!!
Individualism vs. collectivism (IND): The extent to which individuals decide to remain in a collaborative group is what is referred to as collectivism. Individualism is used to describe when an individual chooses to work on his or her own. For the people preferring collectivism, the social framework of being a part of a group who cares where members care for one another, is their preference.Masculinity vs. femininity (MAS): This where an individual either prefers to work in a heroic solitary (?) atmosphere, solo work, as opposed to working as a group, cooperationng, and creating relationships.
The fifth dimension is was added later by Hofstede (2001): Long-term vs. short-term orientation that refers to which how a culture programs its members to accept delayed gratification of their material, social, and emotional needs.
Good job! I made minor changes to the grammar itself.
One thing to note is that English speakers tend to use simpler sentences than speakers of many other languages -- even in formal, academic writing. if you have many different clauses in one sentence, you may want to make two or three different sentences instead.
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