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It's terrible today! It was rain and blowing strong wind this morning. My umbrella got blown inside out in a strong wind while putting up it. And then I was panicked and dropped my iphone. My phone's screen cracked!! . And home button was flown away somewhere. It was all the wind's fault. I so got pissed off then. What really terrible day today is!! But I noticed that I can almost control iPhone without home button.

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It's been a terrible today!

It was raining and a strong wind was blowing strong wind this morning.
My umbrella got was blown inside out in by a strong gust of* wind while putting up as I was opening** it.
And then I was panicked and dropped my iPhone.
My phone's screen cracked!! .
And home button was flown flew*** away somewhere.
It was all the wind's fault.****
I so got so pissed off then.
What a really terrible day today is it had been!!

But I noticed that I can almost control my iPhone without the home button.

ゆじ君、I feel bad that you and your iPhone suffered so badly because of the wind. But your writing is excellent. Very good use of expressions. 

* "gust of wind" is a single big blast of wind.

** We usually "open" an umbrella rather than "putting it up."

*** Instead of "was flown" it's more natural to say that it "flew" away. Even though the wind is what sent the home button away, it is a stronger description to say that the button "flew."

**** Excellent! I'm not happy that your iPhone was ruined, but this expression is very good. 

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It's terrible today!

It was raining and blowing a strong wind this morning.
My umbrella got  was blown inside out in a strong wind while I was putting up it.
And then I was panicked and dropped my iPhone.
My phone's screen cracked, and the home button was flown flew away somewhere.
It was all the wind's fault.
I so got pissed off became annoyed then.
What really terrible day today is was!!

But I noticed that I can almost control my iPhone without its/the home button.

Excellent writing!

I suggest using "became annoyed" rather than "got pissed off" when writing. :)
Keep up the great work!

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