Describe a photo-002
Many clouds were in the sky.
A road was almost empty.
A few of street lights sat on the both sides of the road.
Two traffic lights sat on the next fork in the road.
One was lighting a red sign and the other one was lighting a green sign.
A girl stood on one side pavement of the road.
She wore a purple coat with a hood, a blue jeans, and sneakers.
She held out her right thumb.
A man rode a white horse past her.
He looked at the girl with a smile.
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Describe a photo-002
The sky was cloudy.A road was almost empty.
There were a few of street lights sat on the both sides of the road.
There were two traffic lights at sat on the next fork junction in further down the road.
One was lighting showing a red light sign and while the other one was showing lighting a green light. sign.
A girl stood on one side the pavement adjacent to of the road.
She wore a purple coat with a hood, blue jeans, and sneakers.
She held out her right thumb.
A man rode a white horse past her.
He looked at the girl with a smile.
Hi Hsing,
Keep writing. Your sentences were generally clear though I did some corrections for you.
Cheers, Lance
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Describe a photo-002
Many clouds were in the sky.A road was almost empty.
A few street lights stood on both sides of the road.
Two traffic lights stood on the next fork in the road.
One was lighting a red sign and the other one was lighting a green sign.
A girl stood on the sidewalk.
She wore a purple coat with a hood, blue jeans, and sneakers.
She held out her right thumb.
A man rode a white horse past her.
He looked at the girl with a smile.
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