Discuss getting news through the Internet and newspaper, and also give your opinion
Technology has been improve faster than ever in recent year. More and more people get news by the Internet instead of newspapers, but there are also a lot of people still tend to read newspapers every day. So there comes a question about whether the Internet can totally replace newspapers someday or not?
Because of the invention of the smartphone and the normalization of WIFI, we can gain new informations immediately without any obstacles. Furthermore, we can watch the news programs anywhere and anytime. Compare to newspapers, which have to use paper to print, the Internet provides a better way to protect the environment and to preserve nature resources.
There is a fatal disadvantage about getting news through the Internet. If there is no proper equipment to surf on the Internet, people have no news to read. Although newspapers are produced by more money and human resources, they don’t need any extra stuff to read. The reader just has to hold them on hand and read them. To calculate the cost in a short time like a few months or a year, it seems that getting news through newspapers is more economical than the Internet.
In my opinion, reading the news on the Internet is a lifestyle that people can’t avoid it. And in the future, more and more important news will be put on the cloud or some news platforms without print on newspapers. However, for the incompleteness of the Internet, in nowadays, it’s not the time to forbid newspapers printing. There are still many people don’t have sufficient condition to use the Internet. I believe that the government has to reduce the waste of paper, and to see the benefit in providing news on the Internet in the long term.
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Discuss getting news through the Internet and newspaper, and also give your opinion
Technology has been improving faster than ever in recent years. More and more people get their news by from the Internet instead of newspapers, but there are also a lot of people who still tend to read newspapers every day. So there comes is a question about whether the Internet can totally replace newspapers someday or not?Because of the invention of the smartphone and the normalization of WIFI, we can gain new informations information immediately without any obstacles. Furthermore, we can watch the news programs anywhere and anytime. Compared to newspapers, which have to use paper to print, the Internet provides a better way to protect the environment and to preserve nature natural resources.
There is a fatal disadvantage about getting news through the Internet. [This is correct, but "fatal" is very strong language. It means that people will die because of this. A better word choice would be "significant."] If there is no proper equipment to surf on the Internet, people have no news to read. Although newspapers are produced by more money and human resources, they don’t need any extra stuff to read. The reader just has to hold them on hand and read them. [Grammar is correct, but I do not understand what you mean]. To calculate the cost in a short time like a few months or a year, it seems that getting news through newspapers is more economical than the Internet.
In my opinion, reading the news on the Internet is a lifestyle that people can’t avoid it. And in the future, more and more important news will be put on the cloud or some other news platforms without print on newspapers. However, for due to the the current incompleteness of the Internet, in nowadays, it’s it is not the time to forbid newspapers printing ["it's" is correct but "it is" should be used here for emphasis]. There are still many people who don’t have sufficient condition resources to be able to use the Internet. I believe that the government has to reduce the waste of paper, and to see the benefit in providing news on the Internet in the long term.
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