Planet's Day
This time I have no idea what is right to write. I could write about things happened in the day, or write about thoughs and feelings.
Today it's Planet's Day and I am writing in the darkness to save electricity.
Today I miss my girlfriend and I wish to share this darkness place with her ;-)
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Planet's Day
This time I have no idea what to write about. I could write about things that happened in the day, or write about thoughts and feelings.Today it's Planet's Day and I am writing in the darkness to save electricity.
Today I miss my girlfriend and I wish to share this dark place with her ;-)
in the day: lo mejor es decir "today"
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Hello Rulo!
I will help you with some corrections here and advice later. :)
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Planet's Day
This time I have no idea what is right to write. (ok)I could write about things happened in the day, or write about thoughs and feelings.
I could write about things that happen during the day, or write about thoughts and feelings.
Today it's Planet's Day and I am writing in the darkness to save electricity. (ok)
Today I miss my girlfriend and I wish to share this darkness place with her ;-)
Today, I miss my girlfriend and I wish to share this dark place with her. OR Today, I miss my girlfriend and I wish to share this darkness with her.
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Good writing in general, so keep up and keep learning!
As for the girlfriend, just write what you would say to her. I'm sure she'll appreciate your thoughts on this dark day. :-)
Regards,
David
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