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a toefl article Today, our world changed too much, however, I always believe that the most important consideration by keep any relationship between people is telling the truth. Absolutely, the most obvious advantage of telling the truth for keeping the relationship is showing in the customers and companies. So if the customers always telling the truth with the companies, the companies will keep trading with these customers. In contrast, when the customers don't tell the truth with the companies in order to get more benefits, they can get more money in a short time, after the companies found that they lied, they will get harsh punishment, can't keep trading with these companies and even more companies don't want to trade with they. Here is an example about my friend's father named Ben, when he faces a traffic accident, he tried to get more money, so he moved the car to the right way to let the policemen and secure company think that he was driving in the right way instead of he did some things which are unlawful. Unlucky, the policemen and secure company found that he is treating, they putted he into the prison. Also, if people want to keep the good relationship with other friends, telling the truth is the best way to keep the relationship. Today, many people like to lie to their friend when they are dating and traveling just because they want some little benefit from their friends, however, they don't care what will happen when their friends find that they are lie. They will lost their friends and let other people think they are cheaters. For example, a long time ago, when i was dating, i called my friend and asked how soon he will get there, he told that he was in the road. However, he appeared after half an hour, so I found he was treating, the worst thing was that he didn't admit. Finally, I told he that we could be friends anymore. Last but not the least, telling the truth is also important for the family. When one of the number of the family ill, even he gets the cancer, his family doesn't how to tell the truth, but they also need to tell the truth, in order to let their folk face the situation easily. I want to use a example about the film named Breaking Bad, the protagonist named white, he got he the lung cancer and inoperable, finally before he died, he died like a man and his family also calm down soon. Summarize, I believe that if people always tell the truth with their friends, they can get a good relationship with their friends forever.

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A TOEFL Article

Today, our world changed too much has changed a lot, however I always believe that the most important consideration by keep any to maintain (maintain 在这里倾向于“保持”. "Keep" 有一点保留的意思)a relationship between people is telling the truth.

Absolutely, ("Absolutely" 在这里多余的感觉) the most obvious advantage of telling the truth for keeping to maintain a the relationship is showing in the customers and companies (这里不明白,怎么开头在讲人跟人之间的关系突然变成公司跟客户?). So if the customers are always telling the truth with to the companies, the companies will keep trading with these customers. In contrast, when the customers don't tell the truth with the companies in order to get more benefits, they can get more money in the short term a short time, but after the companies found that they lied, they will get harsh punishment and can't keep trading with these companies. and Other even more companies don't wouldn't want to trade with them either. Here is an example about of my friend's father who is named Ben. When he faces was involved in a traffic accident, he tried to get more money by altering the scene of the incident and showing policemen and the insurance company a scene to make him appear to not have been at fault when in fact he had broken the law. so he moved the car to the right way to let the policemen and secure company think that he was driving in the right way instead of he did some things which are unlawful. Unluckily, the policemen and secure insurance company found that he was lying is treating, they putted he and put him into the prison.

兄弟:只能帮你改到这里。iTalki有一个奇怪的字母限制。你先研究一下。



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