Describe a celebration or moment which has made a deep impression on you.
Describe a celebration or moment which has made a deep impression on you. Please explain the impression and include specific examples and details in you explanation.
The moment when I was in graduate dissertation defense for my master degree leaves me a deep impression.
Before the defense, I prepared my dissertation very carefully. There were three experiments in my research, and I had to analyze a lot of data and dug some useful results from the data. In my dissertation, I demonstrated the results of those experiments and made a conclusion for each experiment.
I was the last one to do the presentation, and there were a lot of audiences. Normally, professors didn’t fail a student in a defense. But I was still nervous when waiting for my turn. I watched my lab mates doing their presentations one by one, and each got a lot of revise suggestions, and each one was frustrated after the defense. I really didn’t want my research to be criticized like that.
Finally, it was my turn. I illustrated my research by PPT, and showed the findings of my research. Then it went to the hash part. The biggest flaw of my research was that I didn’t make the inner logic clearly between those experiments, which made me realized that how important the logic was.
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Describe a celebration or moment which has made a deep impression on you.
Describe a celebration or moment which has made a deep impression on you. Please explain the impression and include specific examples and details in you explanation.The moment when I was in graduate dissertation defense for my master's degree leaves me a deep impression.
Before the defense, I prepared my dissertation very carefully. There were three experiments in my research, and I had to analyze a lot of data and dug some useful results from the data. In my dissertation, I demonstrated the results of those experiments and made a conclusion for each experiment.
I was the last one to do the presentation, and there were a lot of people in the audiences. Normally, professors didn’t fail a student in a defense. But I was still nervous when waiting for my turn. I watched my lab mates doing their presentations one by one, and each got a lot of
Finally, it was my turn. I illustrated my research by PPT, and showed the findings of my research. Then it went to the hash part. The biggest flaw of my research was that I
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Describe a celebration or moment which has made a deep impression on you.
Describe a celebration or moment which has made a deep impression on you. Please explain the impression and include specific examples and details in your explanation.The moment when I was in I defended my graduate dissertation defense for my master degree leaves me a deep left a deep impression on me.
Before the defense, I prepared my dissertation very carefully. There were three experiments in my research, and I had to analyze a lot of data and dug dig out (this is in the same tense as "analyze", so therefore "dig") some useful results from the data. In my dissertation, I demonstrated the results of those experiments and made a conclusion for each experiment.
I was the last one to do the presentation, and there were a lot of people in the audiences. Normally, professors didn’t fail a student in a defense. But I was still nervous when waiting for my turn. I watched my lab mates doing their presentations one by one, and each got a lot of revise suggestions each one getting many revisions suggestions. and Each one was frustrated after the defense. I really didn’t want my research to be criticized like that.
Finally, it was my turn. I illustrated my research by PPTin a powerpoint that I had created, and showed the findings of my research. Then it went to the hash part. Then Came the harsh criticism: The biggest flaw of my research was that I didn’t make the inner logic clearly between those experiments, which made me realized that how important the logic wasis.
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