My dream
I am ten years old.I am a girl. I want to be a ballet dancer when I grow up.For many reasons, the first I am as pretty as ballet dancer. The second is I dancer ballet very well and I had participated in many show. The last I like the bellet dresses so much.
I want to be a lawyer too. Beacuse law stand for the justice. If I am a lawyer, I can help the disadvantaged people. For my lawyer dream, I will continue studying english and I want to be a student for the London School of Economics and Political Science in the near future.. At the same time, I won't give up my ballet dream.
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My dream
I am ten years old. I am a girl. I want to be a ballet dancer when I grow up. This is for many reasons. The first is that I am as pretty as a ballet dancer. The second is I dance ballet very well and I had participated in many shows. The last is that I like the ballet dresses so much.I want to be a lawyer, too, because law stands for justice. If I am a lawyer, I can help the disadvantaged people.
Very well written! If you continue writing this well, your law will be very legal and just. (Although the writing won't help your dancing ;( )
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