Birthday´s my father Today was it the birthday´s my father. He is 56 years. my grandmother came to my home for the celebration, my brothers and my mother they were here too.My mother bought a pie, was

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Carlos Muñoz Piedra

Birthday´s my father Today was it the birthday´s my father. He is 56 years. my grandmother came to my home for the celebration, my brothers and my mother they were here too.My mother bought a pie, was very good. my big brother bought a pocket to my father, I had not money so I will buy a present the next year. I would be very grateful if someone could correct the text. I can also help a someone with the Spanish .

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Birthday´s my father

Today was it the birthday´s my father's birthday. He is 56 years old. My grandmother came to my home for the celebration. My brothers and my mother they were here too. My mother brought a pie, and it was very good. My big brother brought a pocket to my father. I had no (or more correctly " I didn't have any..) money so I will buy a present the next year.

I would be very grateful if someone could correct the text. I can also help a someone with the Spanish .

One last things, saying "My mother and brothers were here too" sounds better. Mom comes first :)

Also, i am unclear on what you mean by your brother brought him a 'pocket' ?

Birthday´s my father My father's birthday

Today was it the birthday´s my father my father's birthday. He is 56 years. mMy (Capitalise the beginning of every sentence) grandmother came to my home for the celebration, and my brothers and my mother they were here there too. My mother bought a pie, which [was very good] tasted very good OR was delicious. mMy big brother bought a pocket (?) to for my father. , I had not money so I will buy a present the next year.

Do you mean your brother bought a pocket knife?

In English, when you are speaking about possession the subject goes first.

For example, if I was describing a book that belongs to Maria, I would say: Maria's book.

A daughter that belongs to Mr Cox: Mr Cox's daughter.

In this case, the birthday that belongs to your father would be: Your father's birthday.

I would be very grateful if someone could correct the text. I can also help a someone with the Spanish .

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