sometimes
Sometimes you think that you deserve good things, because you are striving all your live. But when you, all days, see that you are short on time, and the mighty future came without stop, and you feel how the time is slipping between your fingers, you think that all was a lie. The sadness it's not a trusted adviser, perhaps you must sit down keep calm and don't remember your grovel life, and finally believe in you and only in you.
Some times all us need a rest.
Good night and sweet dreams ^^
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Sometimes
Sometimes you think that you deserve good things, because you are (have been) striving all your live. But when you, all days, see (when every day you see) that you are short on time (short of time), and the mighty future came (comes) without stop (stopping), and you feel how the time is slipping between your fingers, you think that all was a lie (possibly better: that was all a lie). The Sadness it's (is) not a trusted adviser, perhaps you must sit down, keep calm and don't remember (not remember) your grovel (grovelling) life, and finally believe in you and only in you.Sometimes all of us need a rest.
Good night and sweet dreams ^^
PS
Thanks for sharing such a nice piece of writing!
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