Writing task 2 Writing practise IELTS TASK 2 - Please check and correct my mistakes Thank you very much! Topic: The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singer or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead. Nowadays, the media focus on information about the star’s private live and relationships of celebrities. In contrast, many ordinary people are seldom appear in the newspaper, television and others media. From my perspective, I think we should spend much time reporting the lives of regular person. It is true that we are interested in news about famous people because their lives always attract the audiences. Besides, the star people want to pay attention by the media, so they try to make many scandals. Uppermost, the media could earn a lot of money if they have many viewers. Recently year, they must face to lack of the viewers and are pressured from audiences. In addition, the advertising companies almost want to promote their products to customer, due to they usually access with celebrities in order to public. On the other hand, the media also should report the lives of ordinary people who have charity work be reported by newspaper. For instance, a doctor who saved many patients from the death or businessman who is called philanthropist spend much money for charity. In conclusion, the media focus too much on the stars. I believe we need to release magazines or newspapers about the ordinary people and what have they done to the society or what have they contribute to country. Moreover, it will encourage people to do more the positive behaviors for the community.