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The advantages and disadvantages of studying overseas. Studying abroad has become popular in the world, especially people in developing countries like Vietnam. When the standards of living increase, people tend to improve their knowledge for a better life, so they choose to study in developed countries where they can get progressive education. However , everything has its advantages and disadvantages, so studying abroad is not an exception. It is generally believed that studying overseas brings many benefits. Firstly, most people agree that the quality of education in foreign schools is much better than in domestic schools. In fact, when studying abroad students can have opportunities in order to study new technologies and updated knowledge which may help them find jobs easily after graduation. Furthermore, it is a good chance to learn and improve their foreign languages. Experience shown that learning language with the native speakers is the best way to enhance people's language. On the other hand, studying abroad also has some drawbacks. The main disadvantage is that it is often expensive. It is clear that students not only pay their school tuition, but also pay for their living cost. As a result, finance is the biggest problem which can distract students' mind from their studying to earning money. In addition, adapting to a new environment is a real challenge for every foreign students. For example, the changes of weather may affect students' health and difference culture can influence their mind which can destroy their confidence or even to be a victim of discrimination. Consequently, if students do not have enough physical and mental strength, studying overseas can become their nightmare. In conclusion, the negative effects seem to outweigh the positives. Therefore, people must to think carefully before deciding to study abroad.

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The advantages and disadvantages of studying overseas.

Studying abroad has become popular in the world, especially among people in developing countries like Vietnam. When the standards of living increase, people tend to improve their knowledge for a better life, so they choose to study in developed countries where they can get a progressive education. However , everything has its advantages and disadvantages, so and studying abroad is not an exception.

It is generally believed that studying overseas brings many benefits. Firstly, most people agree that the quality of education in foreign schools is much better than in domestic schools. In fact, when studying abroad, students can have opportunities in order to study new technologies and updated knowledge, which may help them find jobs easily after graduation. Furthermore, it is a good chance to learn and improve their foreign languages. Experience shown that learning a language with the native speakers is the best way to enhance people's language.

On the other hand, studying abroad also has some drawbacks. The main disadvantage is that it is often expensive. It is clear that students not only pay their school tuition, but also pay for their living cost. As a result, finance is the biggest problem, which can distract students' mind from their studying, changing their focus from education to earning money. In addition, adapting to a new environment is a real challenge for every foreign students. For example, the changes of weather may affect students' health, and differences in culture can influence their mindset, which can destroy their confidence or. They may even to be become a victim of discrimination. Consequently, if students do not have enough physical and mental strength, studying overseas can become their nightmare.

In conclusion, the negative effects seem to outweigh the positives. Therefore, people must to think carefully before deciding to study abroad.


Excellent job! It sounds very natural overall. My corrections are very minor.

Two things of note: if you use "which," you need to use a comma right before it. Also, the end of your first paragraph is a great opportunity to use the set phrase "and ____ is no exception."


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Good point,as for me one more advantage of studying abroad is you can interact with new culture, go out from your comfort zone. Moreover, you can acquaint with new friend in new enviroment, who can set to you up extraordinary mindset.

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