The return of Jedi
It´s been a long time since last time that I write here, and the worse. I´m not writing because of laziness, I would shall be ashamed, and I´m, trust me.
Last Saturday I did watch the movie LOGAN. I loved that´s film, Hugh Jackman was awesome ! !
It was a great interpretation and great way to say bye to Wolverine .
Please someone correct me ! !
Thank you
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The return of Jedi -> The Return of the Jedi (This is a proper title of a film. If you are trying to talk about yourself as a Jedi, then you would write "The Return of a Jedi")
It´s been a long time since last time that I write here, and the worse. -> It's been a long time since last I wrote here. (I don't know what you mean by 'and the worse.')I´m not writing because of laziness, I would shall be ashamed, and I´m, trust me. -> I stopped writing because of laziness, I'm ashamed to admit. ('and I'm, trust me' I don't think you need this.)
Last Saturday I did watch the movie LOGAN. -> Last Saturday, I watched the movie Logan.
I loved that´s film, Hugh Jackman was awesome ! ! -> I loved that film; Hugh Jackman was awesome!! (note the semicolon(;) Feel free to review rules about punctuation if you don't understand why to use this instead of a comma.)
It was a great interpretation and great way to say bye to Wolverine . -> It was a great interpretation and a great way to say bye to Wolverine.
Please someone correct me ! ! -> Please someone, correct my English!!
Thank you
*Oh no! Bye to Wolverine?! I haven't seen the movie yet, so now I have to go watch it.
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