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i have a English report, and i have to translate this event. If you can help me to correct the wrong grammar or get it more smooth, i will very thankful!
【Case 1】
The seventy five years old woman were brought to the Emergency Room with Acute upper abdominal pain and Decreased consciousness.
She got diagnosed wit Acute cholecystitis and were brought to the Intensive Care Unit .
During the admission,she took Abdomen C-T and ERBD . Simultaneously,she receive the treatment by depanmine and antibiotic.
Unfortunately,because of her older age. She had complicate Pneumonia and Acute ARF although the team were given the active treats.
In the end , she receive Endotracheal intubation and respiratory care .
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HelloI have an English report, and Ihave to translate this event. If you can help me to correct the wrong grammar or get it more smooth, I will be very thankful!
【Case 1】
The seventy five years old woman were was brought to the Emergency Room with Acute upper abdominal pain and Decreased consciousness.
She got diagnosed wit Acute cholecystitis and were brought to the Intensive Care Unit .
During the admission,she took Abdomen C-T and ERBD . Simultaneously,she receives the treatment by depanmine and antibiotic.
Unfortunately,because of her older age. She had complicate Pneumonia and Acute ARF although the team were given the active treats.
In the end , she receive Endotracheal intubation and respiratory care .
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Translate to English
Helloi have a English report, and i have to translate this event. If you can help me to correct the wrong grammar or get it more smooth, i will very thankful!
【Case 1】
The seventy five year old woman were was brought to the emergency room with acute upper abdominal pain and decreased consciousness (I think you mean "she was unconscious").
She got was diagnosed with acute cholecystitis and were was brought to the Intensive Care Unit .
During the her admission, she took received an Abdomen C-T and ERBD . Simultaneously she received the treatment by of depanmine and an antibiotic (or you could say "treatment of dopamine and antibiotics").
Unfortunately, because of her older age, she had complicate complications with pneumonia and acute ARF although the team were given the active treats. (I think you mean "even though the medic team were very active with their treatment"?)
In the end she received an endotracheal intubation and respiratory care.
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Well done! - Lisa
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