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A rainy day Hello, what's the weather like today in your country? What's the climate like in your spring? In my country, it's raining outside today. It always rains in spring. To tell the truth, I don't like the rainy days at all. I feel stuck in the house. I don't want to walk out and get wet of my shoes. That would be very uncomfortable and sometimes cause me to get cold. It even ruins my plan to go to the library today. I hate the rainy days. I love sunny days. Whenever the sun is shining, there is hope and delight in my mind. I could go anywhere without getting my shoes wet. I could play tennis in the outdoor court, since I could never afford the high cost of playing in the indoor courts. I could walk on the street and meet my friends more easily in sunny days. I love sunny days. I hope it will be clear as soon as possible. I am trying to start over to practise my writing in everyday life. Could you help me to point out any mistakes of above text?

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A rainy day

Hello, what's the weather like today in your country? What's the climate like in your spring?

In my country, it's raining outside today. It always rains in spring.
To tell the truth, I don't like the rainy days at all. I feel stuck in the house. I don't want to walk out and get wet of my shoes(my shoes wet). That would be very uncomfortable and sometimes it causes me to get a cold. It even ruins(ed) my plan to go to the library today. I hate the rainy days.

I love sunny days. Whenever the sun is shining, there is hope and delight in my mind. I could(can) go anywhere without getting my shoes wet. I could(can) play tennis in(on) the outdoor court, since I could never afford the high cost of playing in(on) the indoor courts. I could walk on the street and meet my friends more easily in(on) sunny days. I love sunny days. I hope it will be clear as soon as possible.

I am trying to start over to practise my writing in everyday life.
Could you help me to point out any mistakes of above text?

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