Talk about my hope and dream Dear Amy, I'm feeling depressed recently. I need to change it. I've decided to move to another country. If I want to move abroad, I will learn a new language. So that I've

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Talk about my hope and dream Dear Amy, I'm feeling depressed recently. I need to change it. I've decided to move to another country. If I want to move abroad, I will learn a new language. So that I've joined in a language education school. I work in the day and study at night that is tired, but I'm fulfilling. I hope to start a new life in another country. If I made a lot of money, I'd travel around world. And if I met a good guy, I'd be with him and build a happy family. Love you. Emma

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Talk about my hopes and dreams

Dear Amy,
I'm I have been feeling depressed recently. I need to a change. it. I've decided to move to another country. If I want to move abroad, I will need to learn a new language, so that I've joined enrolled in a language education school. I work in during the day and study at night, which is tiring that is tired, but I'm fulfilling. I hope to start a new life in another country. If I made make a lot of money, I'd will travel around the world. And if I meet a good guy, I'd could be with him and build a happy family.
Love you.
Emma

Talk about my hope and dream

Dear Amy,

I'm feeling depressed recently. I need to change it. I've decided to move to another country. If I want decide to move abroad, I will learn a new language so that I've joined I can work in a language education school. I work in the day and study at night and that is (1) tiring tired, but this is very fulfilling. I'm fulfilling. I hope to start a new life in another country. If I (2)make a lot of money, I'd travel around the world. And If I (3)meet a good guy, I'd be with him and build a happy family.

Love you.
Emma

Hi Emma,

I wish you the best in all your future endeavours. Just a few suggestions for you:

(1) "tiring" and "tired" are both adjectives. The difference is that "tiring" is used more for an event while "tired" is used to describe the physical state of one's mind or body.

Since you are describing your hectic daily schedule, we use "tiring".

(2) /(3) You are referring to a situation that has yet to occur, we use present tense (i.e "make" and "meet")

Hope this helps.

Cheers, Lance

Talk about my hope and dream

Dear Amy,
I'm feeling depressed recently. I need to change it. I've decided to move to another country. If I want to move abroad, I will have to learn a new language. So that I've joined in a language of education school. I work in the day and study at night that is tired, but I'm fulfilling. I hope to start a new life in another country. If I made a lot of money, I'd travel around world. And if I met a good guy, I'd be with him and build a happy family.
Love you.
Emma

Talk about my hope and dream

Dear Amy,
I have been feeling depressed recently. I need to change it. I've decided to move to another country. If I move abroad, I will learn a new language. To help with that I've joined a language education school. I work in the day and study at night it is tiring , but I'm fulfilled. I hope to start a new life in another country. If I make a lot of money, I'd travel around world. And if I meet a good guy, I'd be with him and build a happy family.
Love you.
Emma

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