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Describe a person-my friend Cheney Most of my friends share the similar life style with me, but not Cheney. His morals and values is quite different from mine due to his special experience, which can’t stop us from being good friends yet. I met Cheney in my freshman summer vacation. That scene is still in my mind. A stout guy asked if I wanted to buy a bottle of ice water. Heavily sweating as he was, a happy smile still hang on his lips. After a short chat, we found that we were high school mates but never met before. Cheney has a miserable childhood. He suffered from severe hydrocephaly at 8 years old and his left body was disabled after the surgery. Then his father abandoned the whole family and his mother couldn’t pay for the tuition of both him and his little sister. Cheney was forced to drop out of high school and became the mainstay of his family at 15. Firstly he was a street vendor selling soft drinks, he saved enough money to open his own grocery store after three years. Cheney is a people person with strong will and indomitable spirit. That’s why he can support the whole family and a few poor students in our hometown. “My greatest regret is that I couldn’t access to higher education. The only thing I can do is to help as many students as I can so that they wouldn’t follow my step.” Two years ago Cheney made a decision to open a bookstore, which was opposed by most friends including me. Because this traditional industry is adversely affected by the developing of electronic books. But no one can change Cheney’s mind. The most important purpose of his book store is encouraging local people to read books instead of playing mah-jong during the spare time. Though disagreed with his decision, I still provided help when he was in narrow budget. Luckily his business was reported by local news and then he received the support of local government. Hope his business maintain flouring so that he could help more people. Cheney is an ordinary man doing great things. He erects a real morality model for me. (a Corner of Chaney‘s bookstore, anyone can enjoy free reading here. I am glad most cosumers order drinks though they aren't cost constrained)

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Describe a person-my friend Cheney

Most of my friends and I share a similar life style, but not Cheney. His morals and values are quite different from mine, due(suggestion: replace 'due' with 'owing') to his special experiences. However, these differences have not yet stopped us from being good friends. (Using 'however' here emphasises that even though you have different values, you still manage to remain friends). 

I met Cheney during my freshman summer vacation. That scene is still in my mind. A stout guy asked if I wanted to buy a bottle of ice water. Heavily sweating as he was, a happy smile still hung on his lips. After a short chat, we found that we were high school mates but never met before.

Cheney had a miserable childhood. He suffered from severe hydrocephaly at 8 years old, the surgery for which his left body was disabled. His father then abandoned the whole family and his mother couldn’t pay for the tuition of both him and his little sister. Cheney was forced to drop out of high school and became the mainstay of his family at 15. First, he was a street vendor selling soft drinks, from which he saved enough money to open his own grocery store after three years. Cheney is a people person with strong will and indomitable spirit. That’s why he could support his whole family and a few poor students in our hometown.

“My greatest regret is that I couldn’t access higher education. The only thing I can do is to help as many students as I can so that they won't follow in my steps.”

Two years ago Cheney made a decision to open a bookstore. His decision was opposed by most of his friends, including me. I opposed this decision because this aging industry is adversely affected by the increasing prevalence of electronic books. Despite this opposition, no one could change Cheney’s mind. The most important purpose of his book store is encouraging local people to read books instead of playing mah-jong during their spare time. Though I disagreed with his decision, I still provided help when he operated on a tight budget. Luckily his business was reported by local news and he consequently received the support of local government. I hope his business continues to flourish so that he may help more people.

Cheney is an ordinary man doing great things. He is my greatest role model.  

(a Corner of Chaney‘s bookstore, anyone can enjoy free reading here. I am glad most cosumers order drinks though they aren't cost constrained)
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Describe a person-my friend Cheney

Most of my friends share a similar life style with me, but not Cheney. His morals and values is are quite different from mine due to his special experience, which can’t has not stopped  us from being good friends yet.

I met Cheney in my freshman summer vacation. That scene is still in my mind. A stout guy asked if I wanted to buy a bottle of ice water. Heavily sweating as he was, a happy smile still hang hung on his lips. After a short chat, we found that we were high school mates but never met before.

Cheney has had a miserable childhood. He suffered from severe hydrocephaly at 8 years old and his left body was disabled after the surgery. Then his father abandoned the whole family and his mother couldn’t pay for the tuition of both him and his little sister. Cheney was forced to drop out of high school and became the mainstay breadwinner of his family at 15. Firstly he was a street vendor selling soft drinks. He saved enough money to open his own grocery store after three years. Cheney is a people person with strong will and indomitable spirit. That’s why he can support the whole family and a few of the poorer students in our hometown.

“My greatest regret is that I couldn’t access to higher education. The only thing I can do is to help as many students as I can so that they wouldn’t won't follow in my steps .”

Two years ago Cheney made a decision to open a bookstore, which was opposed by most friends including me, because this traditional industry is adversely affected by the developing development of electronic books. But no one can was able to  change Cheney’s mind. The most important purpose of his book store is encouraging local people to read books instead of playing mah-jong during their  spare time. Though I disagreed with his decision, I still provided help when he was in narrow budget  financial limitations. Luckily his business was reported by local news and then he received the support of local government. Hope his business maintain flouring continues flourishing so that he could can help more people.

Cheney is an ordinary man doing great things. He erects a real morality model for me. He is an outstanding role model for me. 

(a Corner of Chaney‘s bookstore, anyone can enjoy free reading for free here. I am glad most consumers order drinks though they aren't cost constrained)

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