If there is love, we can meet again in this life
Although we have been together for more than a year, but for me, as if we have been in love for centuries, the feelings of your own heart, can not use words to express. Short time more than a year, let me wait to fall in love with you, you will not forget this present life all in my mind.
Every day I silently pray to God, pray for God to allow us to renew the fate of this life, without you accompany me, I can not feel a little happy, without you accompany the day, where does happiness come from?
Lonely days and nights, who can hear the call of my heart to your true feelings; who can understand my heart to you very deep love; who can understand how I lost your grief and helplessness.
We have a happy picture, now only in the memories we emerge; heartfelt happy laughter, no longer think of the whole room, empty silence, no longer you familiar figure and gentle breath.
"How many trance time, see you in the crowd stream, you have emerged vaguely, the twinkling of an eye and see... My heart..." kind of lost, who can feel? If there is love, we can meet again in this life?
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If there is love, we can meet again in this life
Although we have only been together for a bit more than a year, but for me, it is as if we have been in love for centuries. The feelings of your own heart, can not be expressed in words. use words to express. Short time more than a year, let me wait to fall in love with you, you will not forget this present life all in my mind.Every day I silently pray to God, pray for God to allow us to renew the fate of this life, without you accompanying me, I can not feel a little happy, without your presence accompany the day, where does happiness come from?
Lonely days and nights. Who can hear the call of my heart to your true feelings; who can understand my heart to you very deep love; who can understand how I lost your grief and helplessness.
We have a happy picture, now only in the memories we that emerge; heartfelt happy laughter, no longer thinking of the whole room, empty silence, no longer your familiar figure and gentle breath.
"How many trance times, seeing you in the crowd stream, you have emerged vaguely, the twinkling of an eye and see... My heart..." kind of lost, who can feel? If there is love, we can meet again in this life?
Although and but perform the same function in the sentence. Only use one in your sentence to show a contrasting point.
The parts I marked in yellow are parts were I was not able to understand how they fit with the rest of the sentence. I would like to understand your writing completely as it is interesting. Perhaps you could edit this writing a bit until your message is completely clear.
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