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"You have just returned from a holiday in the USA. You stayed with your aunt, uncle and cousins for two weeks. Write a letter to your aunt and uncle and thank them for their hospitality. Tell them what you enjoyed most about the holiday. Tell them about your journey home, and what the weather is like now".
Dears,
As first, thank you very much for your hospitality during my journey. I had 2 fantastic weeks. I liked very much our walk in the park and our visit around the heart of the city. My journey to come back was very good and also the weather here is sunny.
I hope to see you soon.
Bye
Simona
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Could you help me to prepare this letter?
Thank you very much to help me, to check if the letter that I try to write, with the information below is correct."You have just returned from a holiday in the USA. You stayed with your aunt, uncle and cousins for two weeks. Write a letter to your aunt and uncle and thank them for their hospitality. Tell them what you enjoyed most about the holiday. Tell them about your journey home, and what the weather is like now".
Dears,
As first, Thank you very much for your hospitality during my stay journey. I had 2 fantastic weeks. I really enjoyed liked very much our walk in the park and our visit around/through the heart of the city. My journey home to come back was pleasant. The airline staff are very friendly and efficient. very good and also The weather at home is warm and sunny, it's spring and I am looking forward to summer. here is sunny.
I hope to see you soon.
Bye
Simona
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Could you help me to prepare this letter?
Thank you very much to help me, to check if the letter that I try to write, with the information below is correct."You have just returned from a holiday in the USA. You stayed with your aunt, uncle and cousins for two weeks. Write a letter to your aunt and uncle and thank them for their hospitality. Tell them what you enjoyed most about the holiday. Tell them about your journey home, and what the weather is like now".
Dears,
As first, thank you very much for your hospitality during my journey. I had 2 fantastic weeks. I liked very much our walk in the park and our visit around the heart of the city. My journey to come back was very good and also the weather here is sunny.
I hope to see you soon.
Bye
Simona
Hi Simona,
I have reworded your letter below. These are suggestions only, as I have changed things that weren't 'wrong' but I have tried to make it more natural. A few explanations;
1 Dear is used for individuals or groups (no plural
2 You don't really need the 'At first/firstly' but if you do use it (slightly more formal) I would use 'Firstly,' as it is more natural.
3 In english, journey and voyage general refer to the period of actually getting somewhere, not the actual vacation.
4 Definitely more natural to say I like something very much, rather than I liked very much something
5 My journey home/ my return journey, my trip home all work. my journey to come back doesn't work.
6 There are many ways to sign off a letter or an email depending on the context. Bye is usually used verbally rather than in a letter.
Good luck!
Dear Uncle Bob, Aunt Mary, Jack, Chris and Emma,
Firstly, let me thank you very much for your generous hospitality during my holiday/vacation. The two weeks I spent with you were fantastic and I enjoyed our walk in the park and visit to the heart of the city very much! My journey home went very well and now I am here the weather is sunny.
I hope to see you soon.
Best wishes,
Simona
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