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My hobby My hobby included watching movies, shopping and swimming. In my free time, I like watching movies with my husband. I love acting movies of American. Somethings like that Fast and Furious, Mr and Mrs Smith,etc... There are really attractive to me. Sometimes, I go to the cinema with my son on the weekend. That time is great relax! And I like shopping with my friends. We always come to trading center, where we can eat some foods and drink somethings. We can chat and talk everything together. It is quite funny and happy. Finally, I love the yoga and swimming. I used to do yoga ago. But I have not enough time to do it. I am really regreat! Otherhand, I like swimming too. In the summer, I ussually go to the swimming poor with my family. There is quite near my house. I wish I have a lot of time more. Then I can do everythings, which I want.

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My hobbies Bởi vì chị đã nhắc đến nhiều hobbies chứ không phải 1 hobby nhé =))

My hobbies included are watching movies, shopping and swimming.
In my free time, I like watching movies with my husband. I love American action movies of American. Somethings like that such as Fast and Furious, Mr and Mrs Smith, etc... They are really attractive to me. Sometimes, I go to the cinema with my son on the weekend. That time is great relax!
And I like shopping with my friends. We always come to trading center, where we can eat some foods and drink some things. We can chat and talk everything together. It is quite funny and happy.
Finally, I love doing yoga and swimming. I used to do yoga years ago. But I didn't have not enough time to do it. I am really regret! On other hand, I like swimming too. In the summer, I usually go to the swimming pool with my family. It is quite near my house.
I wish I had more time. Then I can do everything, which I want.

Good writing Ms Thu. 

Có 1 gạch đầu dòng to đùng cho chị nhé: 
There is/ are + Danh từ hoặc cụm Danh từ ( Tính từ + Danh từ) chứ không + với tính từ nhé.

Ví dụ: Không có There is near hay there is big nhé. Mà phải là There is a big apple chẳng hạn ;) 

Cố gắng hơn chị Thu nhé. Chị đang làm rất tốt đấy ^^


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My hobby

My hobbies are included watching movies, shopping and swimming.
During In my free time, I like watching movies with my husband. I love acting American movies , such as Somethings like that Fast and Furious, Mr and Mrs Smith and etc... There They are really attractive to me. Sometimes, I go to the cinema with my son on the weekend. Those times are great to relax! I also like shopping with my friends. We always come go to trading center, where we can eat some foods and drink something. We can chat and talk everything together. It is quite funny and happy.
Finally Lastly,  I love yoga and swimming. I used to do yoga  before ago. But I  don't have not enough time to do it. I am really regreat regretful! On the otherhand, I like swimming too. In During the summer, I usually go to the swimming pool with my family. There It is quite near my house.
I wish I have a lot of time more. Then   so I can do everything which I want.

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