Introduction 2.
Hello!
My name is Bence, but you can call me Ben. I attended the secondary grammar school in Szombathely, where I studied Maths and Physics. I’ve already travelled a lot during those years, mainly on train and inland Hungary... but sometimes the Train Company could also make balkan states/conditions. /// I hope you understand: the trains are sooo bad like balkan conditions.///
Since secondary school, I work for an event organizer company, first as a salesperson and now I am a graphic designer.
Besides university, I play football and table soccer in my free time.
When Tomi found me with the idea of the „LadaTour” I said yes without thinking. It wasn’t too difficult for me, because I’m crazy about these spontan thrills.
I met the two guys from earlier, from a university football championship. I got into their team because of a Transsylvanian Cup.
The truth is that I really really really would like to go already, but a few things should be organized till the departure...
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Introduction 2.
Hello!My name is Bence, but you can call me Ben. I attended the secondary grammar school in Szombathely, where I studied Maths and Physics. I’ve already I travelled a lot during those years, mainly on the train and to inland Hungary... but sometimes the Ttrain Ccompany made it difficult, like things sometimes are in the Balkans could also make balkan states/conditions. /// I hope you understand: the trains are sooo bad, just like bthe Balkans can be conditions.///
Since secondary school, I have been working work for an event organizer company, first as a salesperson and now I am as a graphic designer.
Besides studying at university, I play football and table soccer in my free time.
When Tomi found me with floated the idea of the „LadaTour” I said yes without thinking. It wasn’t too difficult for me, because I’m crazy about spontaneous these spontan thrills.
I met the two guys from earlier, from a university football championship. I got into their team because of a the Transsylvanian Cup.
The truth is that I really really really would like to go be there already, but a few things should need to be organized before I leave till the departure...
Great job! It's very clear. I just changed a few things so that they would "flow" better and sound more natural to English speakers.
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Introduction 2.
Hello!My name is Bence, but you can call me Ben. I attended the secondary grammar school in Szombathely, where I studied Maths and physics. I travelled a lot during those years, mainly on train and inland Hungary... but sometimes the Train Company was as bad as in the Balkans /// I hope you understand: the trains are sooo bad like balkan conditions.///
Since secondary school, I worked for an event organizer company, first as a salesperson and now as a graphic designer.
Besides university, I play football and table soccer in my free time.
When Tomi found me with the idea of the „LadaTour” I said yes without thinking. It wasn’t too difficult for me, because I’m crazy about these spontaneous thrills.
I met the two guys from earlier, from a university football championship. I got into their team because of a Transsylvanian Cup.
The truth is that I really really really really would like to go already, but a few things should be organized before the departure...
Very well written!
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Introduction 2.
Hello!My name is Bence, but you can call me Ben. I attended the secondary grammar school in Szombathely, where I studied Maths and Physics. I’ve already travelled a lot during those years, mainly on by train and within inland Hungary... but sometimes the Train Company could also make balkan states/conditions. (légyszi írd le ezt magyarul, nem értem hogy balkáni országokba ment a vonat, vagy balkáni körülmények voltak rajta, s sztem az előttem szólók sem értették. Az első úgy javította, hogy hát igen, ahogyan a balkánon szokás néha) /// I hope you understand (alt: just to be clear): the trains are sooo bad like balkan conditions. (Alt: The conditions on trains resemble the ones commonly encountered in the Balkans.) ///
Since finishing secondary school, I have been working for an event organizer company, first as a salesperson and now I am as a graphic designer.
Besides studying at university, I play football and table soccer in my free time. (ez úgy hangzik, mintha az egyetem is szabadidő lenne, inkább: I am studying at xx university, and I spend my free time playing football and table soccer.)
When Tomi found me with the idea of the „LadaTour” I said yes without thinking. It wasn’t too difficult for me (better: it wasn't a difficult decision), because I’m crazy about these spontan spontaneous thrills like this.
I met the know the two of them or the other two members of the trip two guys (főleg, ha nőnemű is van köztük, nem emkékszem pontosan, hogy ki volt a másik kettő) from earlier, from a university football championship. I got into was in their team because of during a Transsylvanian Cup. (ha egy Erdély kupa akkor a Transylvanian Cup, ha ez a neve akkor marad, de akkor the Transsylvanian Cup, vagy an edition of the... ha rendszeresen megrendezik)
The truth is that I really really really would like to go already, but a few things should be organized (ha nem amerikai a célközönség, akkor organised) till the before departure...
Szia! Ezek nagyrészt javaslatok, nem hibák, mert számomra (ausztrál angol környezetben élve) természetesebben hangzik így. A balkán-dolog nem tiszta, de ha elmagyarázod, lefordítom szívesen.
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