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I watched a movie called LAPLAND.
It`s so interesting. Because many dancers were appeared in the movie.
There were dancers who I know in the movie.
By the way I came like Emma Stone.She is so cute.
I wont to watch the movie once again soon.
Thank you.
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LALALAND
I watched a movie called LAPLAND.It`s so interesting. Because many dancers were appeared in the movie. (You can go ahead and connect these two sentences. "It's so interesting because many dancers appeared in the movie." the word "were" is an unnecessary add on)
There were dancers who I know in the movie.(Replace "know" with the word "recognized" it indicates that you know the actor and it sounds more natural)
By the way I came like Emma Stone.She is so cute. (Confused on this part. "You came like Emma Stone" Are you referring to your approval/liking to her due to her cuteness? Consider rewording)
I wont to watch the movie once again soon. ("Wont" refers to "will not do" I believe the word you are looking for is "want"
Thank you.
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