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a report about the effects of a new shopping center on my city ( my writting for test) The purpose of this report is to show the advantages and disadvantages of the new shopping centre to the environment and our community. First of all, there are many trees were planted around the center, therefore, it brings city a green and fresh air. What's more, there are many interesting slogans and activities encourage people, particularly children, to protect our environment. However, the parking of the center is quite small so there are many cars are parked on the street. The best solution would be to there is a place for car parking. In addition, the closing time is too late and it makes noise at night. would recommend that it should be closed earlier. In sum up, i would say that the center brings many advantages to our city, however, it would be a better place if those issues can be solved.

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G'day Ho Thi Nga, :)

a report about the effects of a new shopping center on my city ( my (writting)writing for test)

The purpose of this report is to show the advantages and disadvantages of the new shopping centre to the environment and our community.
First of all, there are many trees that were planted around the center, therefore, it brings the city a green and fresh air. What's more, there are many interesting slogans and activities that encourage/encouraging people, particularly children, to protect our environment.
However, the parking of the center/the centre's parking is quite small so there are many cars (are) parked/that are parked on the street. The best solution would be to there is a place for car parking. In addition, the closing time is too late and (it) the centre makes noise at night. I would recommend that it should be closed earlier.
In summing up/to sum up/in summary, i would say that the center brings many advantages to our city, however, it would be a better place if those issues can/could be solved.

Hope that helps! :)

PJ

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