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I would appreciate if someone gives me a hand on it For many young people it is hard to find a job in which they can fit properly. This is because of the differences in terms of needs amongst schools and employers. While the firsts want students to be the best theoretical prepared as possible, the seconds would like students to be qualified in aspects of the working life Due to this, school should understand that providing a good future for students is its main purpose, and due to that, the school shall provide courses and qualification that could match the requirements which employers have. This does not mean that schools have to abandon their theoretical way of seeing education. This only means that schools and employers should figure out a way which benefits students the most. Moreover schools are unable to provide any useful carrer advice, maybe becuase teachers themselves have only had teaching as working experience. Maybe a good way to sort that problem out could be firstly remaining in contact with students who finish their studies. Then collecting data and information from these former students about their working experiences. Finally the school could call the most representative of them and let them give advices to students who want to undertake further studies. To conclude, the besta way lays with coordination among schools and employers. Schools have to understand that their "output" is the "input" for the employers. On the other hand, Employers themselves, have to understand that the purposes of school are not only to create a sort of working background but also to give students a good general education which is vital. This essay should be made for a C1 profile exam. If there is any piece of advice you can give me, please give it to me.

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I would appreciate if someone gives me a hand on it

For many young people it is hard to find a job in which they can properly fit. This is because of the different needs of schools and employers. While the former want students to be as theoretically prepared as possible, the latter would like students to be qualified in aspects of working life.

Due to this, schools should understand that to provide a good future for students is its main purpose, and thus the school should provide courses and qualifications matching employers' requirements. This does not mean that schools have to abandon their emphasis on theory. It only means that schools and employers should figure out a way which benefits students the most.

Moreover schools are unable to provide any useful career's advice, maybe because teachers themselves have only had teaching as working experience.
Maybe a good way to sort that problem out would be firstly to remain in contact with students who finish their studies, then to collect data and information from them about their working experiences. Finally the school could invite the most representative of them to give advice to students who want to undertake further studies.


To conclude, the best way lies with collaboration among schools and employers. Schools have to understand that their "output" is the "input" for employers. On the other hand, eEmployers themselves, have to understand that the purposes of school are not only to create a sort of working background but also to give students a good general education which is vital.


This essay should be made for a C1 profile exam. If there is any piece of advice you can give me, please do so. Thanks

Very well written!

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