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hello, can somebody correct my redaction, please I am police officer since 1.999. I chose this job because I wanted to help to the people. Too I waited to can work in a job dynamic and interesting with the possibility of change into the same corp of differents destinations and functions. Other reason for choose this employment was the possibility of get a promotion with the pass of the years. Nowadays, after of eighteen years and a lot of differents interventions and destinies, I like a lot my job and I have confirmed that the most important sense of my work is to help the maximum posible to the people. We must preserve the order and the citizen security, this is the way for the people cans to live calm, they mustn´t to feel fear for their personal integrity or for their possessions or beloveds. Like this them will to be free because they wouldn´t feel afraid. I think too that is important for to have a good imagen of the police, that we, the policemen, in our work have a relationship friendly and nearly with the citizens, by this way we will obtain more reliability and affection of the society. By last, for me, the principal characteristic of a good police officer is the integrity, a good agent must walk off he corruption and favourable treatment.

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Hello, can somebody correct my text, please

I have been a police officer since 1999. I chose this job because I wanted to help the people. Also I wanted to work in a dynamic and interesting job with the possibility of moving into different places and functions. The other reason for choosing this employment was the possibility of getting a promotion with the passing of years.

Nowadays, after of eighteen years and a lot of different interventions and destinies, I like my job a lot and I have confirmed that the most important sense of my work is to give the maximum possible help to the people.

We must preserve order and the citizen's security, this is the way for the people to live calmly, they mustn´t feel fear for their personal integrity, their possessions or their beloved ones. Like this they will be free because they won´t feel afraid.
I think too, that it is important to have a good image of the police, that we, the policemen, in our work have a friendly and close relationship with the citizens, in this way we will obtain more reliability and the affection of the society.

By last, for me, the principal characteristic of a good police officer is integrity, a good agent must walk away from corruption and favourable treatment.

Hello Jesus,

Interesting text about your work, remember that in English adjectives often come before the nouns, not after (as in Spanish!) Also adjectives never change, it doesn't matter if they are describing singular or plural nouns.

When you have a verb following a preposition (for, after...) the verb should be in the -ing form. Modal verbs like must, will and should are followed directly by the infinitive (no 'to')

Hope this helps

Bob

Hello! Will somebody correct my essay, please?

I've been a police officer since 1999. I chose this job because I wanted to help to the people. Also, I wanted to work in a dynamic and interesting job with the possibility of variety in location and post. Another reason I choose this job was the possibility of get a promotion in time.
Nowadays, after of eighteen years and a lot of differents adventures, I still enjoy my job, and I have concluded that to me the most important aspect of my work is helping as many people as possible.
We must preserve the order and the citizens' security. That way, people can live peacefully and without fear for their personal safety or for their possessions or loved ones. They want to feel free and unafraid.
I think, too, that it's important for the public to have a good opinion of the police, and that we police officers have a friendly relationship with the public. This way we will obtain the support and affection of the society.
Finally, for me, the principal characteristic of a good police officer is the integrity. A good officer must shrug off he corruption and favoritism.

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