received a Girls' Day gift!
It's been exactly a week since the Girls' Day (a special day for the girls to make wishes, and receive gifts according to their wishes), and I've totally forgot about (or rather dismissed) my whishes to receive a gift, until this afternoon. One of my classmates handed me a little black bag and told me someone had intended it to me, probably as a Girls'Day gift.
I was overjoyed and cried out so loud when I opened the gift and saw BBC Sherlock's loooong face×, that all the class turned their curious eyes on me.
The kind-hearted little angel was an anonymous girl, and this is all I know about her save a note she left under the cards printed with Sherlock and John's images.
It said in the last,"Cheers to the doctor and the detective!!! "
It's really a good day and I can even feel sunshine in the cold and cloudy weather outside.
And I decided to return this kindness by pass it on. I planed to realize another girl's little wish.
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I received a Girls' Day gift!
It's been exactly a week since the Girls' Day, (a special day for the girls to make wishes, and receive gifts according to their wishes) and I've totally forgot about (or rather dismissed) my wishes to receive a gift, until this afternoon. One of my classmates handed me a little black bag and told me someone had intended it to me, probably as a Girls'Day gift.I was so overjoyed and cried out so loudly when I opened the gift and saw BBC Sherlock's loooong face×, that all the class the whole class turned their curious eyes on me.
The kind-hearted little angel was an anonymous girl, and this is all I know about her save a note she left under the cards printed with Sherlock and John's images.
It said in the last sentence,"Cheers to the doctor and the detective!!! "
It's really a good day and I can even feel sunshine in the cold and cloudy weather outside.
And I decided to return this kindness by passing it on. I planned to make another girls little wish come true. realize another girl's little wish.
Review your use of articles. Concentrate on when we don't use articles such as when we are speaking about a noun in general or a public holiday. Compare the present perfect tense to the simple past tense to see their differences in meaning and use. Well done on your overall clear and flowing writing.
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