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Please Take Care of My Cat TASK: A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - give contact details for when you are away - give instructions about how to care for your pet - describe other household duties _______________________________________________________ Hi Sara, How are you? How is Spain? I know you've had a vacation recently and visited Valencia. I really hope you've spent a great time with your boyfriend. I'm so happy you agreed to look after my place while I'm on a conference in Sweden. I'm leaving in a couple of days and going to be out for a week. I'll leave on Monday and be back on Sunday, but it'll be okay if you come to my place from Tuesday till Saturday. There isn't much things I'd like to ask you to do. Just feed my cat and water plants. About the cat, please always leave fresh water and a full bowl of dry food for her. There is a fresh meat in the fridge, please give it 1 time in 2 days. Also, please heat it before serving. You may also give a fresh yolk and some milk to a cat. But this is optional. Regarding plants, don't worry. It's pretty easy to watch over them. Just check every pot everyday and once the top soil is dry, water it. That's it. Feel free to cook and having a nap if you want, but please don't have parties - our neighbors won't be happy if you do . A password for Wi-Fi is on the stick note on the fridge. Thanks a lot, N~

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Please Take Care of My Cat

TASK:
A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- give contact details for when you are away
- give instructions about how to care for your pet
- describe other household duties
_______________________________________________________

Hi Sara,

How are you? How is Spain? I know you had a vacation recently and visited Valencia. I really hope you had a great time with your boyfriend. I'm so happy you agreed to look after my place while I'm at a conference in Sweden. I'm leaving in a couple of days and am going to be out for a week. I'll leave on Monday and be back on Sunday, but it'll be okay if you come to my place from Tuesday till Saturday.

There aren't many things I'd like to ask you to do. Just feed my cat and water the plants.
About the cat, please always leave fresh water and a full bowl of dry food for her. There is fresh meat in the fridge, please give it once every 2 days. Also, please heat it before serving. You may also give a fresh yolk and some milk to a cat. But this is optional.

Regarding the plants, don't worry. It's pretty easy to watch over them. Just check every pot every day and when the top soil is dry, water it. That's it.

Feel free to cook and have a nap if you want, but please don't have parties - our neighbors won't be happy if you do . The password for Wi-Fi is on the sticky note on the fridge.

Thanks a lot,
N~
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Please Take Care of My Cat

TASK:
A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- give contact details for when you are away
- give instructions about how to care for your pet
- describe other household duties
_______________________________________________________

Hi Sara,

How are you? How was your holiday? I know you've taken a vacation recently, and  you were in visited Valencia. I really hope you had spent a great time with your boyfriend. I'm so happy that you have  agreed to look after my place while I'm attending  on a conference in Sweden. I'm leaving in a couple of days and going to be away  for a week. I'll leave on Monday and will be back on Sunday, so will it be it'll be okay for you  if you come to my place to look after it next Tuesday till Saturday ?

There isn't much things I'd like to ask you to do. You just have to feed my cat and water the plants in my house..
About the cat, please always make sure you leave some fresh water and a full bowl of cat food for her all the time. There is some fresh meat in the fridge, so please give it to my cat every other day. Also, please heat it up before serving it to my cat. You may also feed my cat with eggs a fresh yolk and  or some milk to a cat if you want to; its is all  up to you -- but just to let you know (that) my cat prefers to eat egg yolk only, rather than the whole egg.
Regarding my plants, you don't have to worry too  much about them. They are pretty easy to take care of. You just have to check every pot each day, and once you find any of them with a dry  the top soil is dry, you then just have to  water it. That's all.

Also, do feel free to cook anything for yourself or  take a nap while you are in my place if you want to, but please don't hold any party, for  my neighbours won't be happy if there is one . The  password for my Wi-Fi is on a  sticker  on the fridge.

Thanks a lot,
N~
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Hi Nadiya! This was really great, there were just a couple little things that needed changing. One thing I wanted to say is the reason why I changed 'much things' to 'many things' -- 'things' is countable in this sentence, so we need 'many'. 'Much' can be used with uncountable nouns, like 'I don't have much time' or 'There wasn't much rain today', etc. I hope that helps! It was over all a great piece of work. Best, Julie

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