An important place
I"m going to talk about the public swimming pool in the city's stadium .
I like to go to this place in the summer .I went there pretty regularly, about 3 or 4 times a week. Obviously, people just go swimming there. You can see people from all age groups at the pool ,such as old people, young people, kids.
Many children go there to learn swimming. In fact, this is exactly what I did when several years ago. When I was a university student, my close friend teach me how to swim at this swimming pool. However , I just found it was very difficult. It took me one week to master it.
Anyway, I think this swimming pool is a really important place because it provides a place for local public to do some exercise . It can help the people to live a healthy life. In my opinion, swimming is the best sport. It does not make you feel too exhausted and it trains any part of your body. Therefore, many people like to go there .
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An important place
I"m going to talk about the public swimming pool in the city stadium .I like to go to this place in the summer. I go there pretty regularly, about 3 or 4 times a week. Obviously, people just go swimming there. You can see people from all age groups in the pool, such as old people, young people, kids.
Many children go there to learn to swim. In fact, this is exactly what I did several years ago. When I was a university student, my close friend taught me how to swim at this swimming pool. However, I just found it was very difficult. It took me one week to master it.
Anyway, I think this swimming pool is a really important place because it provides a place for the locals to do some exercise. It can help the people to live a healthy life. In my opinion, swimming is the best sport. It does not make you feel too exhausted and it trains any part of your body. Therefore, many people like to go there .
Hello Yuan,
Some nice writing, your friend must be a good teacher as I still can't swim very well after many years of trying.
Just a few small corrections, remember to put spaces after commas and full stops and not before.
Bob
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An important place
I"m going to talk about the public swimming pool in the city's stadium .I like to go to this place in the summer .I went there pretty regularly, about 3 or 4 times a week. Obviously, people just go swimming there. You can see people from all age groups at the pool ,such as old people, young people, kids.
Many children go there to learn swimming. In fact, this is exactly what I did when several years ago. When I was a university student, my close friend teach->taught me how to swim at this swimming pool. However , I just found it was very difficult. It took me one week to master it.
Anyway, I think this swimming pool is a really important place because it provides a place for locals public to do some exercise . It can help the people to live a healthy life. In my opinion, swimming is the best sport. It does not make you feel too exhausted and it trains any many parts of your body. Therefore, many people like to go there .
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