Hello! I'm an English learner. Could you please help me correct the errors in this article? Thanks!
I'm doing a survey of how Chinese students and British students spend their precious winter holiday. Usually, the duration of the winter holiday in China, approximately, is 20 days. Because of which, Chinese students will make full use of their spare time to travel resorts with their parents or relatives. Some students have a different thought, which is to attend private courses for further study as to make a preparation of confronting challenges in a new semester. Unfortunately, to seniors who are going to have a National Matriculation Test, they will have a tougher holiday than other students.
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Hello! I'm an English learner. Could you please help me correct the errors in this article? Thanks!
I'm doing a survey of on how Chinese students and British students spend their precious winter holiday. Usually, the duration of the winter holiday in China, is approximately approximately, is 20 days. Because of this which, Chinese students will make full use of their spare time by traveling to to travel resorts with their parents or relatives. However, some students go about it differentlyhave a different thought, which for example, some is to attend private courses for further study in order to prepare for as to make a preparation of confronting upcoming challenges in a new semester. Unfortunately to for the seniors, who are going to have a National Matriculation Test, they will have a tougher holiday than other students.Please note that these are just my personal suggestions, of course there are different ways to express the same meaning, and all of them can be correct :)
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