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Please someone can correct my english ? Being in a clique, can bring a sense of belonging. Indeed, the people who belong to a clique, have the same centers of interests. So, they can have the same passions, and the same subjects of conversation. If the people like nerds, Gothics, who were generally excluded, they can integrate cliques who correspond them. If they were often criticized, they could support and help together. The people belong to a clique will feel less different. They could have a role, they could answer the question “who am I”: a nerd, a jock, a geek…When we belong to a clique, we feel important. We feel listened and hear from the other members of the group. However, in spite of these many numerous positive points, to belong to a clique can be confronted with problems. For example, when we belong to a clique, it is difficult to make new friends.

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Please someone can correct my english ?

Being in a *clique, can bring a sense of belonging. Indeed, the people who belong to a clique, have the same centers of interests. So, They can have the same passions, and the same subjects of conversation. *If the people like nerds, and Gothics, who are were generally excluded, they can join integrate cliques who to which they correspond them. If they are were often criticized, they could/can support and help each other together. The people who belong to a clique will feel less different. They could*/can have a role, they could/can answer the question “who am I”: a nerd, a jock, a geek…When we belong to a clique, we feel important. We feel listened to and hear from the other members of the group and we feel listened to by them.
However, in spite of these many *numerous positive points, to belong to a clique can be confronted with cause problems. For example, when we belong to a clique, it is difficult to make new friends.

* peut-être  'Grouping/Hanging out together [se grouper] can bring a sense . .' ;   le mot 'clique' est légèrement péjoratif en anglais

* Si de tels gens, comme des 'nerds' et 'Goths', qui sont généralement exclus, ils pourraient s'intégrer aux cliques auxquelles il s'accordent.

Les gens, tels que des 'nerds' ou des 'Goths', qui sont généralement exclus, ils peuvent s'intégrer aux cliques auxquelles il s'accordent.

* en anglais, le conditionnel [could] n'est pas nécessaire dans de telles phrases

* 'many'  or  'numerous', not both  [ l'un ou l'autre, pas les deux ! ]

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Please someone can correct my English?

Being in a clique can bring a sense of belonging. Indeed, people who belong to a clique usually have similar interests. They have similar passions and subjects of conversation. People like nerds and Goths, who have been generally excluded, can integrate into corresponding cliques. Together, they could support and help each other against outside criticism. People who belong to cliques feel less different. They have a role are able to answer the question “who am I?”, a nerd, a jock, a geek…When we belong to a clique, we feel important. We feel listened to and heard by the other members of the group.
However, in spite of these many positives, belonging to a clique comes with problems. For example, when we belong to a clique, it is difficult to make new friends.
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Please can someone correct my English ?

Being in a clique can bring a sense of belonging. Indeed, the people who belong to a clique have the same center of interests, so they can have the same passions, and the same subjects of conversation. If the clique is one of nerds, goths who would usually be excluded, can be included if they are similar enough*. If the clique is criticized, they will support and help each other. The people belonging to a clique will feel alike. They have a role to play and they can answer, without hesitating, the question “who am I?”: a nerd, a jock, a geek … When we belong to a clique, we feel important. We feel heard and hear from the other members of the group.
However, in spite of these many numerous positive points, to belong to a clique can lead to problems. For example, belonging to a clique can make it hard to make new friends.

*I did not understand this sentence, so guessed at something. Please rewrite.

Very well written!

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Being in a clique can bring a sense of belonging. Indeed, the people who belong to a clique have the same centers of interests. So, they can have the same passions, and the same subjects of conversation. If the people are like nerds or Gothics Goths (who were are generally excluded) they can integrate into cliques who correspond to them.

If they were are often criticized, they could support and help together one another. The people belong to a clique will feel less different. They could have a role, they could answer the question “who am I”: a nerd, a jock, a geek…When we belong to a clique, we feel important. We feel listened r and hear from the other members of the group.
However, in spite of these many numerous* positive points, to belong to a clique can cause a person to be be confronted with problems. For example, when we belong to a clique, it is difficult to make new friends.


*many and numerous mean the same thing, just choose one :)

Well done, just a few small corrections... Impressive writing!


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Please someone can correct my english ?

Being in a clique can bring a sense of belonging. Indeed, the people who belong to a clique have the same centres of interest. So, they can have the same passions, and the same subjects of conversation. If the people like nerds, Gothics, who were generally excluded, can create cliques who respond to them. If they were often criticized, they could support and help together. The people belong to a clique will feel less different. They could have a role, they could answer the question “who am I”: a nerd, a jock, a geek…When we belong to a clique, we feel important. We feel listened and heard from the other members of the group

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However, in spite of these numerous positive points, to belong to a clique can be confronted with problems. For example, when we belong to a clique, it is difficult to make new friends.


1.) Write "many positive points"

OR

"numerous positive points"

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