Please correct a letter for giving my host mother
Thank you your kindness during my stay.
First, before I came to here, I was nervous. But you encouraged me on the email. It easd my mind.
Second, I looked forward to eat your dishes everyday. It's so delicious. I'm sad I can't eat any more.
Finally, thank you for congratulated me on my birthday. I'll never forget I had a special 20th birthday in Sydney.
I had a great time in Sydney. I love Sydney.
When I come to Sydney again , I'll come to Kally's house so take care of yourselves.
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Please correct a letter for giving my host mother
Thank you for your kindness during my stay.First, before I came here I was nervous, but you encouraged me, which eased my mind. (I think that was what you were trying to say)
Second, I looked forward to eating your meals everyday. They were so delicious and I'm sad I won't be able to eat them anymore.
Finally, thank you for congratulating me on my birthday; I'll never forget I had a special 20th birthday in Sydney.
I had a great time in Sydney and I love everything the city has to offer. When I come to Sydney again , I'll definitely come to Kally's house again.
Take care of yourselves.
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Please correct a letter for giving my host mother
Thank you for your kindness during my stay.First, before I came to here, I was nervous, but your emails encouraged me on the email and eased my mind.
Second, I looked forward to eating your dishes everyday. They're so delicious. I'm sad I won't be able to eat any more.
Finally, thank you for congratulating me on my birthday. I'll never forget I had a special 20th birthday in Sydney.
I had a great time in Sydney. I love Sydney.
When I come to Sydney again , I'll come to Kally's house. so Take care of yourselves.
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Thank you for your kindness during my stay.
Before I came here, I was nervous. But you encouraged me with your email. It eased my mind.
Secondly, I looked forward to eating your dishes everyday. They were so delicious. I'm sad I can't eat them any more.
Finally, thank you for congratulating me on my birthday. I'll never forget I had a special 20th birthday in Sydney.
I had a great time in Sydney. I love Sydney.
When I come to Sydney again , I'll come to Kally's house.
Take care of yourselves.
Before I came here, I was nervous. But you encouraged me with your email. It eased my mind.
Secondly, I looked forward to eating your dishes everyday. They were so delicious. I'm sad I can't eat them any more.
Finally, thank you for congratulating me on my birthday. I'll never forget I had a special 20th birthday in Sydney.
I had a great time in Sydney. I love Sydney.
When I come to Sydney again , I'll come to Kally's house.
Take care of yourselves.
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Thank you for your kindness during my stay.
Before I came here, I was nervous. But you encouraged me with your email. It eased my mind.
Secondly, I looked forward to eating your dishes everyday. They were so delicious. I'm sad I can't eat them any more.
Finally, thank you for congratulating me on my birthday. I'll never forget I had a special 20th birthday in Sydney.
I had a great time in Sydney. I love Sydney.
When I come to Sydney again , I'll come to Kally's house.
Take care of yourselves.
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