The spring has come to Moscow
The spring has come to Moscow. The Sun is shaining brightly and birds are singing happily. The snow has almost melted and the strams have run everywhere. It is warmer and I can walk without a hat. I like spring for it very much! :) It is very dirty and deep puddles around now and this is what I don`t like in spring, but soon grass will grow and dandelions will bloom. I want to go outside as aften as possible and to travel as far as possible. Soon it will be possible to leave city and to cook shasliks (I don`t know how it is English!) and vegetables on the fire :)
P.S. Here is too much ”and” )))
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The spring has come to Moscow
The spring has come to Moscow. The Sun is shining brightly and birds are singing happily. The snow has almost melted and the streams have run everywhere. It is warmer and I can walk without a hat. I like spring for that, very much! :) It is very dirty and deep puddles are around now and this is what I don`t like in spring, but soon grass will grow and dandelions will bloom. I want to go outside as often as possible and to travel as far as possible. Soon it will be possible to leave city and to cook shasliks (I don`t know how it is English!) and vegetables on the fire :)P.S. Here is too much ”and” )))
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Spring has come to Moscow
Spring has come to Moscow. The Sun is shining brightly and birds are singing happily. The snow has almost melted and everywhere the streams have started flowing again. It is warmer and I can walk around outside without a hat. I like spring very much! :) It is very dirty, and there are deep puddles around now, which is something I don`t like about spring, but soon the grass will grow and dandelions will bloom. I want to go outside as often as possible and to travel as far as possible. Soon it will be possible to leave the city and to cook shashliks (I don`t know how to say this in English!) and vegetables on the barbecue :)P.S. I've used ”and” too much here )))
- Spring has come.. in this case you don't use "the".. sometimes you do, such as "the spring of 1923" or "going to Africa in the spring" (which is optional here, because you can also say "going to Africa in spring")... You may have heard "Winter is coming" from a popular TV series:)
- you could say "streams are running" but "flowing" is nicer
- I can walk without a hat - sounds a bit like you're learning to walk, so I added "around" and "outside"
- soon the grass will grow.. it's hard to explain why to put "the" here - I think it's because the grass is still there under the snow, if you say "grass will grow" it sounds like there's only dirt there now and new grass will grow. You can also say "the birds are singing happily" and "the dandelions will bloom" if you like, but there's no need to change these two.
- if you cook something on the fire, it means an open fire, like the fireplace in your house, or a campfire.. perhaps this is what you mean?? I'm guessing you mean some kind of grill
btw, I have friends from Poland, Bosnia and Russia who have lived in Australia for over 20 years, and they still can't use "the" properly - so don't worry too much about getting it right!
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The spring has come to Moscow
The spring has come to Moscow. The Sun is shining brightly and birds are singing happily. The snow has almost melted and the streams have flown run everywhere. It is warmer and I can walk without a hat. I like spring for it very much! :) It is very dirty and there are deep puddles around now and this is what I don't like about in spring. But soon the grass will grow and dandelions will bloom. I want to go outside as aften as possible and to travel as far as possible. Soon it will be possible to leave city and to cook shashliks (I don't know how it is said in English!) and vegetables on the stove fire :)P.S. There Here is too much ”and” used here)))
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