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[IELTS essay] Do you think women and men should share household tasks equally? Nowadays, women can earn as much money as men do, that means they have the ability to support the family as well. Since women spend less time on taking care of family, it's a problem how to arrange the household chores. Since today women can have equal access to education, thus they can gain more knowledge and skills from college. It means women can also become business leaders at work, and most employees at work are also comfortable with taking an order from their female supervisors. At present, the gender difference is becoming narrow. Furthermore, many big companies don't have any gender bias when choosing members of the board. In companies, women usually do the same work as men, no matter the type of the job or the burden of the work. In this case, women shouldn't take as much household tasks as before. Men and women can share the household chores equally. However, we still have to admit that there are differences between female and male. For example, if women are pregnant, men as the main labor in families of course should take all the household chores. Another difference is that men normally have much more strength than women. So moving heavy furniture or wash machines something like that should surely be men's duty. In general, I support women and men share the household tasks equally. But in some situations, men should take over all the chores to show consideration for their partners.

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[IELTS essay] Do you think women and men should share household tasks equally?

Nowadays, women can earn as much money as men do.  This means women have the ability to support the family as well. Since women spend less time on taking care of the family, doing the household chores becomes an issue.

Because women today can have equal access to education, they can gain more knowledge and skills from college or university. This means females can also become business leaders at work, and most employees are also comfortable with complying from their female supervisors. At present, the gender difference is becoming narrow. Furthermore, many big companies don't have any gender bias when choosing members of the board. In companies, women usually do the same work as men do, no matter the type of the job or the burden of the work. Since this is the case, women are not obliged to take as much household tasks as they did before. Men and women can share the household chores equally.

However, we still have to admit that there are differences between genders. For example, if women are pregnant, the men should of course perform all the household chores. Another difference is that men normally have much more strength than women do, so moving heavy furniture or machines and the like, should surely be the men's duty.

In general, I support the equal sharing of the household work between men and women.  But in some situations, husbands should take all the work to show consideration for their partners.
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[IELTS essay] Do you think women and men should share household tasks equally?

Nowadays, women can earn as much money as men do, that means they have the ability to support the family as well. Since women spend less time on taking care of family, it's a problem on how to arrange the household chores.

Since today's women can have equal access to education, thus they can gain more knowledge and skills from college (not needed). It means women can also become business leaders at work. Most employees at work are also comfortable with taking an order from their female supervisors. At present, the gender difference is becoming narrow. Furthermore, many big companies don't have any gender bias when choosing members of the board. In companies, women usually do the same work as men, no matter the type of the job or the burden of the work. In this case, women shouldn't take as much household tasks as before. Men and women can share the household chores equally.

However, we still have to admit that there are differences between female and male. For example, if women are pregnant, men are the main labor in families and of course should take on all of the household chores. Another difference is that men normally have much more strength than women. So moving heavy furniture or wash machines is something like that should surely be men's duty.

In general, I support that women and men share the household tasks equally. But in some situations, men should take over all the chores to show consideration for their partners.

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