Someone could correct my sentences please
We have no model that allows us to live happily until the end of time.
How is it that no one wants to live in the city centers when it seems to be the place to be to work and to be distracted?
Pay attention to fixed work time because it does not take into account the variety of tasks to be performed.
Bartering may allow companies to provide goods and services to people who do not have money.
Employees are expected to be conscientious and versatile to evolve (in their careers).
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Someone could correct my sentences please
1) We have no model that allows us to live happily until the end of time. (Correct)2) How is it that Why does no one wants to live in the city centers when it seems to be the place to be to for work and to entertainment be distracted?
We use "distracted" for an unwanted interrupted to our focus and thoughts. I presume you meant "entertainment". We use "how is it" often to ask the way something is made possible (Eg How is it possible for him to escape through the tiny window!). Here, I presume you were asking for an explanation.
3) Pay attention to fixed work time (Do you mean regular work hours?) because it does not take into account the variety of tasks to be performed.
4) Bartering may allow companies to provide goods and services to people who do not have money. (Correct)
5) Employees are expected to be conscientious and versatile to progress / advance evolve (in their careers).
We use "progress" for careers to indicate some upward mobility in roles, ranks and titles. We use "evolve" for something that changes gradually. (Example: Genetic diversity brought about by evolution.)
Hope this helps.
Cheers,
Lance
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Someone could correct my sentences please
We have (Can also say: "There is no model in place..") no model in place that allows us to live happily until the end of time.How Why is it that no one wants to live in the city centers ("city" or even "middle of the city" sounds more nautral but city center is correct depending on where you are referring to when it seems to be the place to be to work and to be distracted?
Pay attention to fixed work time (I'm not sure what this means.) If you meant "amount of time spent at work, then say "Pay attention to the amount of time spent at work" because it does not take into account the variety of tasks to be performed.
Bartering may allow companies to provide goods and services to people who do not have money.
Employees are expected to be conscientious and versatile to evolve You can say: "advance in their careers" or "further their careers." (in their careers).
Great job, hope that helps!
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