Making money
Business and making money have always been the most important thing in everybody’s life. All our activities, like studying are just for making money. However, there is an opinion that businessmen also have social responsibilities, contain help to poor people. I totally agree with this idea. In the following paragraphs I am going to explain more about it and support my agreement by some specific examples.
Firstly, all businesses must be responsible for their contributions and productions. They must product high quality and standard things that are not harmful for the environment and human. Let’s consider a mineral water factory, if they produce poisonous water with poor quality bottle many people will die. I remember that 2 years ago a factory in my city had to pay a heavy penalty because of its unhealthy products, as a result 3 persons died.
Secondly, all successful businessmen are rich, also there are many individuals that are living in poverty. It would be great, if these rich persons help poor families. As donating is an important duty in our religion. My uncle is a manager of a big industrial company, he monthly donates a certain amount of money to disadvantaged children, sends them to school. This social aid makes our world a prettier place for living.
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Making money
Business and making money have always been the most important thing in everyone’s life. In all our activities, like studying, the effort is just for making money. However, there is an opinion that businessmen also have social responsibilities, that consist of helping poor people. I totally agree with this idea. In the following paragraphs I am going to explain more about it and support my agreement with some specific examples.Firstly, all businesses must be responsible for their contributions and productions. They must produce high quality and standard things that are not harmful for the environment and to humans. Let’s consider a mineral water factory, if they produce poisonous water with poor quality bottle, many people will die. I remember that 2 years ago a factory in my city had to pay a heavy penalty because of its unhealthy products, as a result 3 people died.
Secondly, all successful businessmen are rich, but there are many individuals that are living in poverty. It would be great, if these rich people would help poor families. As donating is an important duty in our religion. My uncle is a manager of a big industrial company. He donates a certain amount of money monthly to disadvantaged children and sends them to school. This social aid makes our world a prettier place for living.
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Making money
Business and making money have always been the most important thing in everybody’s life. All our activities, like studying, are just for making money. However, some think that businessmen also have social responsibilities, including helping the poor. I totally agree with this idea. In the following paragraphs I am going to explain more about it and support my argument with some examples.Firstly, all businesses must be responsible for their contributions and products. They must produce high quality and standard things safe for the environment and humans. Let’s consider a mineral water factory. If they produce poisonous water with poor quality bottles many people may die. I remember that 2 years ago, a factory in my city had to pay a heavy penalty because its unhealthy products killed 3 people.
Secondly, all successful businessmen are rich, but many other people live in poverty. It would be great if these rich helped the poor since giving alms is an important duty in our religion. My uncle is a manager of a big industrial company, and he monthly donates some money to disadvantaged children, sending them to school. This social aid makes our world a better place to live in.
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