Near my town
I went to some temples and Shinto shrines near my house today.
It's sunny and breeze day.
I felt really nice and fresh.
There are spiritual places,and my heart is made pure.
You can see a picture that I took.
I'd like to hear your impression.
Thank you so much.
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woooow! the sky is sooo wonderful bright blue!
someday i'll definitely visit Japan! i believe in that! ^^
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Hello, Ray!^^
Thank you so much for your correction.
It's my first time that I got advice to write more notebook from someone!
This advice made me so pleased.(^▽^)/
I will try to write something a little.
I'm also looking forward to see yours.
Thank you my friend.
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Katherine's correction was good but "I'd like to hear your impression" does not make sense and I feel that should have been corrected as well. "You can see the picture that I took, I'd like to hear your opinion." Or "I'd like to know what you think" makes more sense. Good luck! You are doing very well. You must make more notebook entries, they are lovely and very interesting!
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I'm very glad to see your comment.
Your opinion is right.
It's important to talk with nature.
What is the real spiritual meaning?
It's not architectures.
You had them notice that is inside my heart,and I have to talk with it.
Thank you very much for telling me.
Well,I usually don't go to temples without anything special.
Almost Japanese go to temples in order to make a wish for something.
It's usually several times in a year.
I think it's not so much.
There might be a lot of cases of visiting for sightseeing.
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It's very beautiful. I feel like the forest is the most spiritual part, but that's definitely my own bias. You don't see much architecture like that around here. Do you go to temples often to purify yourself?
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