Winnie the Pooh
I have read Winnie the Pooh a few weeks ago. I have also watched cartoon in Russian in my childhood. I caught myself on mind that Winnie the Pooh was a funny, good character, but now he is really old silly bear, who wants only food and sleep. Because of his egoism he tried to grub honey from bees and ate all honey in rabbit's house. And he is always suffer from himself.
Maybe even I don't agree with this article, but I wrote it only to practice.
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Great job, Artem!
You can view some of my corrections below. I am glad that you are writing in English, it is a great way to learn how the language is formed (syntax). Some of my corrections focused on using correct English articles. Message me and let me know if you would like any additional help learning how to use English articles :)
Keep practicing often!
~ Jonathan
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Winnie the Pooh
I have read Winnie the Pooh a few weeks ago [1]. I have also watched the [2] cartoon in Russian in during my childhood. I caught myself on mind thinking that Winnie the Pooh was a funny, a good character, but now I realize that he is really just an old silly bear, who wants only food and sleep. Because of his egoism [3] selfishness he tried to grub grab honey from bees and ate eat all the honey in the rabbit's house , and he is always suffering from himself.Maybe even I don't agree with this article, but I wrote it only to practice.
[1] Because you included the phrase a few weeks ago, you should use the simple past tense, read. Remember, the present perfect tense, have read should not be used with a finished time period. check out http://www.grammar-monster.com/glossary/present_perfect_tense.htm, for more info.
[2] Because there is only one authentic Winnie the Pooh cartoon, place the article the before the noun.
[3] Egoism could be used here, but in the US, we will almost always use selfishness instead.
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