When a juvenile become pregnant
Laura: Amanda has became pregnant. I'm appalled. Take me to her.
David: Oh my god. Get on car!The scandal will bring down her timelife. She doesn't take after you at all.
Laura: you don't understand Amanda at all. She's always high-sounding and careless. And now my father doesn't stop doing down her. What a bummer!
David: Your meaning didn't really get across.
Laura: Noone understands her but me.
David: How's Amanda?
Laura: She's better. She is still going about her work as usual. I think that the scandal won't bring down her.
Laura: Can you pull off the grocery store in front? I want to buy some foods for her.
David: When neighbors are around, it's best to keep off the scandal.
Laura: Yeah,
David: Should we take her to hospital for checking again?
Laura: let me look at!
David: where is your her boyfriend?
Laura: I don't know him. I hope that he will carry her through the ordeal.
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When a Juvenile Becomes Pregnant
Laura: Amanda has become pregnant. I'm appalled. Take me to her.David: Oh my god. Get in the car! This scandal will bring down her life. She doesn't take after you at all.
Laura: You don't understand Amanda at all. She's always high-sounding and careless. And now my father doesn't stop talking bad about her. [Not sure.] What a bummer!
David: Your meaning didn't really get across.
Laura: No one understands her but me.
David: How's Amanda?
Laura: She's better. She is still going about her work as usual. I think that the scandal won't bring down her.
Laura: Can you stop in front of the grocery store? [Not sure.] I want to buy some food for her.
David: When neighbors are around, it's best to not mention the scandal.
Laura: Yeah.
David: Should we take her to the hospital for a checkup again?
Laura: Let me look at it! [Not sure.]
David: Where is your her boyfriend?
Laura: I don't know him. I hope that he will carry her through the ordeal.
I corrected the grammar and weird sentences. It is still confusing though.
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